Two More Drabbles!!

May 10, 2007 14:41


Two Drabbles, both untitled. Labeled according to the day/prompt they're in response to.
Author: Versifico
No pairings, really. Just angsty goodness.
Disclaimer: Disney owns it all.
Both could probably be considered slightly spoilery for AWE.

For the second time Beckett faces the threat of merciless metal at her hands, and his smirk is sickly familiar ( Read more... )

challenge, fic

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erinya May 10 2007, 20:16:08 UTC
The first one is chilling--Beckett's cruelty and her vengeance, both. I can see that happening. And the second...ow. OW. And I mean that in a good way. :-) Great use of that line from the trailer.

He doesn’t bother to smile, not this time, and when she turns an ocean stretches between them.

“Just keep telling yourself that, love,” and it slices through her like a vengeful gale as she retreats toward her future.

Okay, so that was half the drabble, but I had to quote it...the stretching ocean, how she "retreats toward her future." Nice work!

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versifico May 10 2007, 20:34:41 UTC
I so want Lizzie to kill Beckett. Esp. if he kills Weatherby. Not sure where I heard that spoiler, but it seems to be floating around a good bit.

Yay for quoting half a drabble :) I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!

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cmgacrux May 10 2007, 22:59:08 UTC
They're both great. I really enjoyed them. :)

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versifico May 11 2007, 13:35:45 UTC
Thanks for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed them :)

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geekmama May 11 2007, 02:01:48 UTC
Those were really interesting ideas, and very well written.

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versifico May 11 2007, 13:35:58 UTC
Thank you!

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djarum99 May 11 2007, 02:22:06 UTC
Loved both of them. Avenging!Lizzie is perfect; she should be the one to kill Beckett. And the last is so painful, but so beautifully written. Brava, love :)

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versifico May 11 2007, 13:36:25 UTC
Thanks dear :)

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eken95 May 11 2007, 06:53:02 UTC
Very nice indeed.

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versifico May 11 2007, 13:36:53 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed them!

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