Distress and Coma 1/3 [Aoi/Uruha]

[veroxion]

Title: Distress and Coma
Chapters: 1/3
Author: veroxion
Beta: tenshi_makenshi
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Masturbation, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha, Reita/Ruki (hints)

Synopsis: He had never felt so estranged from their friendship before, but now... him and Aoi felt like strangers, and it tore Uruha apart piece by piece inside.

Comments: My first Gaze

Comments

[erikaoi]

Jeez aoi.why did you leave like that!

[veroxion]

Who knows? XD

Well Aoi does but we'll see what happens. Thanks for commenting ^^

[aya_rockz]

why u left, Aoi why...
interesting start. more please ;3

[veroxion]

Everyone seems to be asking that... I feel kinda bad now, lol.

Well, hopefully the next chapter will explain. Thanks for commenting! :3

[queenofyay]

Waaaa, I loves it!! Poor dying Ruki ^_^

[veroxion]

Thank you! And yes, poor Ruki X'D

[juusangatsu]

Best story ive read in over a year, so so curious about the upcoming chapters! Thanx for making my day with awesome writing :'D

[veroxion]

Oh wow, thank you so much! Your lovely comment definitely made my day! ;3;

[ext_1048341]

I seriously love this fanfic..seems more real like as if this is really happening in Aoi and Uruha's life right now..I can't wait to see wat happens next..I like seeing Aoi so flustered and angry..and poor Uru totally clueless...i can't wait to see wat happens next..please update soon..

[veroxion]

(Sorry for the late reply, LJ didn't notify me about anything for a few days!)

Ah, wow. Your comment is so sweet and makes me smile. Is it really that realistic? I tried to mirror their personalities in this with their real life ones. I'm happy you like it so much!

Next chapter should be up really soon. I'm just having a few problems with it. But you won't be waiting too long, I promise! :D