Distress and Coma 2/3 [Aoi/Uruha]

[veroxion]

Title: Distress and Coma
Chapters: 2/3
Author: veroxion
Beta: tenshi_makenshi
Genre: Romance/Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, Masturbation, Sex
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha, Reita/Ruki (hints)

Synopsis: He had never felt so estranged from their friendship before, but now... him and Aoi felt like strangers, and it tore Uruha apart piece by piece inside.

Comments: I don't really like

Comments

[xadowangel]

SPOT!
You updated yeyyyyy!!!! This was so good! Aww poor uruha...poor aoi...well, aoi should have been more careful, u don't take advantage of ur bandmate like that, no no no. Plz update soon!

[veroxion]

I told you I would! ;D

Yep, Aoi made a mistake and is beating himself over the head about it. And Uruha is just like "what exactly is going on here?!" XD

I'll update as soon as I can! <3 *hugs*

[ext_1048341]

Wow I have been waiting so long for you to update..this chapter is awesome..the plot has turned out quite well...all the mixed emotions and feelings felt so right...I really loved Aoi's final outburst to Uruha abt the cruel thing he did...tat was some awesome dialogue..i was kinda touched when he cried over it..i told u before that this fanfic feels very real..it really does feel real..like as if this incident really happend between Aoi and Uruha..plz update soon...i wanna read the last chapter of this awesome fanfic...and the title Distress and Coma really suits this fanfic..

[veroxion]

I'm so sorry about the late update! I ended up re-writing this entire chapter (and still not being pleased with it) and then there were beta problems. Thank you for being patient and waiting! <3

I'm relieved you like this chapter so much. Thank you for your nice comments, I always look forward to them! It's nice to know that you think this is very realistic, because that was what I originally aiming for. You're too kind, and I'll try and get the next chapter up as soon as possible >:)

Well, I got the idea from the song, which is why there are lyrics at the beginning for each chapter, but it's still great you think it suits the fic.

Thanks again for reading and commenting! Your comments make me smile! :D

[dani_25]

I've been waiting for this update!! XD

Poor Uru but much poorer Aoi...
distress all around T__T

Please update soon darling ^___^

*wide eyes*

[veroxion]

Haha, yes. Distress here and distress there... Let's hope the next chapter is much happier XD

Thanks for reading and commenting, dear! I'll update as soon as I can <33

[lady_sb]

What is going on with these two >_< I hope it works out!

Enjoy your holiday!

[veroxion]

They're both confused and possibly in denial, haha. I hope so too, let's pray the next chapter writes itself because I'm feeling rather mean at the moment XD

Thanks so much, I'm sure I will enjoy my holiday as well. I plan to do lots of writing ^_^ <3

[ururuki69]

Sweet baby Jesus I loved this it was so wonderful and I couldn't ask for a better story. I shall wait pateintly for you to update!

[veroxion]

Oh, wow thank you so much! I'll try not to keep you waiting too long for the next update, dear :) <3