Wow. This is fascinating. Others have speculated that Beaver is a lot more cunning than any of us (or the characters) expect him to be (some think he's an evil murderer, and I wouldn't be surprised) so the fact that you've got him involved in some huge conspiracy/plan/something with Veronica (and I'm guessing maybe Mac) is very insightful. I think Beaver will be really important as the season continues (I don't think they made him a series regular just to discover Kendall's trampiness or to be Mac's boyfriend.)
Oooh. So interesting! Honestly can't wait for you to post your next chapter. I'm riveted.
Plus you gave me a reson to use my new favorite icon. ;)
I saw you new Cassidy icon and giggled madly! I love it! And yes, Cassidy is a cunning mastermind. All he needed was confidence and the right woman to straighten him out. He's got that now and there's no stopping him, is there?
The next chapter is already with my betas. I'll have it posted by the end of the week.
As always, thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback.
I like how you set up an entirely different scenario for season 2. And Cassidy all badass and swearing...hot. All the stuff about how Veronica's eyes tell a lot about her feelings is great.
The fact that Cassidy can read her shows that they are close and I can't wait for that interaction.
I love how you made Dick all serious and how you took info from the actual show and worked it into your own idea.
Yes! Veronica and Cassidy have been partners-in-crime for some time now. Why do you think he went to Mac to help him set up the land trust deal? After all, she's not the only computer geek in the school. But she is the only one Veronica trusts.
So, Cassidy (and Mac?) is/are smart enough to take over the world?! Wow. I knew he was smart, and sexy in that geek boy style, but I never looked at Cassidy Casablancas that way before. (Hee.) This is really fun -- can't wait to see what happens next.
You're going to see a whole other side to Cassidy Casablancas. By the time this fic is finished, you might be nominating him to be the new James Bond. HEE!
Okay, this is exciting. Like, edge of my seat, silently freaking out, WTF, because it just feels big. It doesn't hurt that you've proven time and again you can handle plot like few authors in this fandom...
Wow! This looks good! I wanna know who's on the phone and what's goin' on! I like that you don't make Dick a complete idiot...I don't really like him...but still. :) Can't wait to read more!
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Oooh. So interesting! Honestly can't wait for you to post your next chapter. I'm riveted.
Plus you gave me a reson to use my new favorite icon. ;)
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The next chapter is already with my betas. I'll have it posted by the end of the week.
As always, thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback.
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I like how you set up an entirely different scenario for season 2. And Cassidy all badass and swearing...hot. All the stuff about how Veronica's eyes tell a lot about her feelings is great.
The fact that Cassidy can read her shows that they are close and I can't wait for that interaction.
I love how you made Dick all serious and how you took info from the actual show and worked it into your own idea.
Great job!!! Can't wait for more
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I can't wait to see it play out.
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