Comments | veronicamarsfic: Hi I'm new, thought you'd like this more than an intro

amybeckett in veronicamarsfic

Hi I'm new, thought you'd like this more than an intro

Apr 18, 2005 08:46

Title: Strait Forward

Author: AmyBeckett

Pairing/Character: Veronica/Logan, Veronica/Leo

Word Count: ~1,300

Rating: PG-13 (for language)

Summary: What if someone had seen the thing at the Camelot

Spoilers: Weapons of Class Destruction

Disclaimer: Not mine, no money, just having fun.

Notes: When the camera zoomed out and you where looking ( Read more... )

leo, amybeckett, pg-13, veronica, logan

Comments 2

arianamama April 18 2005, 06:37:19 UTC

I liked this. Obviously Veronica would leave out any part including Logan if at all possible especially when talking to Leo. It was great.

It's a fresh angle anonymous April 18 2005, 08:03:00 UTC

This scene has been done so many ways in the last week, so Leo perspective was cool, but I did feel very removed from the action. And Leo seemed kind of dim, but maybe you meant for him to be dim.

That said, I hope you'll write more. Your story had good flow and a good sense of character logic. I'm not a big Leo fan, but I'm sure there are others out there dying for Leo fic.