I'm to the point of thinking you could write whole novels all set in Neptune, California, and go into Stephen King-like detail about the city itself!
And, of course, everyone is right - your characterisation is amazing. It's so easy to picture what's happening in the story because Leo and Veronica are Leo and Veronica. It's like a slice of something that happened when the cameras weren't following around Veronica. *_* I love fics like this that have Veronica in control of a sexual situation because I think it's so fitting that Veronica would really feel like she needs to be in control. I think Leo is a perfect match for Veronica in the sense that he isn't overpowering and he doesn't need control. He's perfectly happy to let Veronica be however in controls he wants.
Oops, sorry, that's a bit much on the analysing. So let me just finish by saying that I COULDN'T LOVE THE BIT ABOUT LEO'S COCK IN VERONICA'S CHEEK MORE. HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!
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I have a soft spot for Leo, I must say, and wow smutty goodness, you've got the sex down wonderfully. Yay.
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I like the Veronica/Leo. I really saw her voice in this.
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And, of course, everyone is right - your characterisation is amazing. It's so easy to picture what's happening in the story because Leo and Veronica are Leo and Veronica. It's like a slice of something that happened when the cameras weren't following around Veronica. *_* I love fics like this that have Veronica in control of a sexual situation because I think it's so fitting that Veronica would really feel like she needs to be in control. I think Leo is a perfect match for Veronica in the sense that he isn't overpowering and he doesn't need control. He's perfectly happy to let Veronica be however in controls he wants.
Oops, sorry, that's a bit much on the analysing. So let me just finish by saying that I COULDN'T LOVE THE BIT ABOUT LEO'S COCK IN VERONICA'S CHEEK MORE. HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!
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I loved this. Their voices were spot-on, and it was hot-HOT! Leo handcuffed... *wipes brow*
Hope to see more of this! =)
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