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Fic: Broken Toys (NC-17) Ensemble

Jun 20, 2005 15:45

Title: Broken Toys
Author: theohara
Pairing/Character: Duncan/Veronica, Lilly/Logan, Logan/Veronica, Logan/Veronica/Lilly, and quite possibly the kitchen sink.
Word Count: 9496
Rating: NC-17
Summary: An answer to the A/U challenge, the "Lilly Doesn't Die" flavor. Porny, angsty, fluffy, and weird.
Spoilers/Warnings: All of Season One.

( Broken Toys )

Comments 117

arabian June 20 2005, 13:19:06 UTC

The whole story was great and heartbreaking, but, but I loved the smut. I've always wondered why there are so many variations of smut in the VM fandom, but barely any (I think this does make the second) Logan/Veronica/Lilly smut. It's so hot and practically canon! And reading this just made me so badly want to read some Saintly Veronica smut with Logan. That innocence that you projected in this story, the attention to Veronica's thoughts, reading Logan through Veronica's thoughts was just wow! Beautifully done. Sensual, sexy, utterly readable and just magnificent.

Now along with more L/V/L smut, I want to read sweet, pre-bad-ass Veronica/Logan smut. Man, talk about a whole new addiction.

Awesome.

lex_83 June 20 2005, 13:19:50 UTC

and here I thought it couldn't get any better than your season two fics.. damn you are good.

I would quote things.. but then you'd have pretty much the entire story down here. I loved that you took things from the season and wove them in differently.. beautiful just beautiful.

in_interval June 20 2005, 13:21:10 UTC

I'm overwhelmed - any comment I leave can't do justice to how really wonderful this is. The whole sense of fate that underlies this piece is perfect. I love the characterization and the feeling of the entire Neptune community. This version of events had Lilly lived would never have occurred to me but now it seems inevitable. Just beautiful.

captainofidiots June 20 2005, 13:25:04 UTC

This was freaking gorgeous. Just... wow. It gave me the shivers. It makes you wonder what would have happened if she had lived. I'm kind of incoherent at the moment, but I'd just like to say that this was stunning.

redflora June 20 2005, 13:27:00 UTC

A.Ma.Zing. Holy crap, the voices - I could SEE this! Brilliant, scary piece, such beautiful writing. Why people aren't showering you with money and begging you to write for their shows is absolutely beyond me... If you tell me they are, you'll make my year.

Just GUH.

*stares blankly at screen, all brain cells having exploded (in a good way)*