Ficlet: Textbook (L/V, Veronica POV) PG-13

[sophia_bee]

Title: Textbook 1/1
Author: Sophia_bee
Pairing/Character: V/L, Veronica POV
Word Count: 1083
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Back at Neptune High after the summer
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers through 1x22, angst

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Comments

[casinobaden13]

You see...that's how a V/L fic should be written. Excellent work, especially the last line. You and sadie, man. You guys have made me your BITCH.

[sadiekate]

Oh, please. You've been my bitch since the day we met.

[casinobaden13]

Shut up.

*breaks down*

It's true!!!!

[sophia_bee]

wow my very own bitch. do you do housework?

[dettiot]

Really nice job! I liked all the imagery you used in the story. And the way you had Logan just sinking deeper and deeper, because it's something that could happen (but we all wish doesn't)--very well done.

[sordidending]

You caught it exactly right - they're too much alike to be good for each other, but it doesn't matter. Also, you pinpointed what ultimately makes them different - she has people like Keith in her life and he doesn't.

thanks a lot. It's always good to see new fic from you.

[writteninstars]

Oh Jay-sus. I feel all shattered and yet vaguely hopeful. You give good fic, lady.

[lex_83]

Maybe she should throw him some rope.

Ok.. I loved loved loved the textbook imagery.. but that line made me want to cry. They are both soo lost in your story but invariably drawn to each other. It's beautiful.