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Fic: The Interrogation (L/Vish), R for character death and some swearing

Jul 02, 2008 20:59

Title: The Interrogation
Author: Princess Orchid
Pairings: None really - L/V if anything
Rating: R, because people die. Not in a nice way, either. And I swear.
Spoilers: All 3 seasons, just to be safe
Summary: There's a serial killer in Neptune! It's post-finale, and someone's been put on the naughty step
Warnings: People die, and it gets slightly ( Read more... )

leo, princessorchid, r

Comments 9

afrocurl July 3 2008, 06:29:20 UTC

It took me a bit of time to realize it was Piz that was being interrogated, but THANK YOU FOR IT! Well, I like how Piz thought all of those murders would get him Veronica in the end.

SILLY BOY!

princessorchid July 3 2008, 07:43:01 UTC

Piz thought a lot of things that weren't true, heh. Like that Veronica could be contented with a little wuss like him... Silly deluded little emo boy.

And the fact I got to kill off Madison? Total bonus!

wily_one24 July 3 2008, 12:16:25 UTC

Man, you killed Madison, Parker and Lianne... AND made Piz be a creepy emo stalker psycho.

I think I love you.

princessorchid July 3 2008, 12:53:32 UTC

I aim to please...

Fic - the only way to kill off people you don't like without getting arrested... ;-)

motylik July 3 2008, 13:32:37 UTC

Wow. I mean wow. This was awesome! I never really hated Piz, but this is still so much in character for him it's actually really creepy and awesome. I can't believe he killed Madison, Parker and Lianne. Wow! I thought it was him from the beginning, and it's just awesome. :D

I think I love you! Piz as an emo stalker and you killed Parker, Madison and Lianne! I just needed to repeat that. Heee. The only one that hurt is Lianne, because I know that will bother Veronica the most, but I hate Parker and Madison enough to have cheered when I figured out it was them he killed!

princessorchid July 3 2008, 14:19:31 UTC

Piz always annoyed me, with his passive agressive personality and his silly hair - I think it was just a hop, skip and a jump to serial killer! I didn't think it would be in character fot him just to be a psycho remorseless killer, but he's naive enough he probably thought Veronica would be impressed by his, uh, incentive. Lianne's murder would have probably hit Veronica quite hard, especially as the last time she saw her mother was just before Lianne ran off with her money - when it comes down to it, she was still her mother though.

And yeah, killing Madison and Parker made me very happy. I don't think I'm psycho at all for saying so! ;-)

vanessagalore July 3 2008, 20:28:09 UTC

Great idea for a fic. I like your fics where you gradually inform the reader as to what's actually going on (I remember the one with Duncan at the dance); it adds an extra dimension to the writing.

princessorchid July 3 2008, 21:39:06 UTC

Hehe heh, I love that you remembered that! I didn't want t hit the reader over the head with the plot, and I always want to surprise folk with my endings. Even if it's just a wee surprise... ;-)

I think you know my feelings about Piz (there's a lot of unsupressed anger), but I thought killing him off would be too easy. Don't get me wrong, I'd do it in a heartbeat...But fucked up psycho emo stalker Piz? I didn't want there to be any chance anyone would feel sorry for the little fucker!

onceuponapillow July 3 2008, 23:17:27 UTC

I really enjoyed this. It gave me a chuckle to read about Piz being that stupid and crazy. And I liked reading from Leo's perspective.

Sad that Lianne died. That would hit Veronica hard. And I actually liked Parker-although she did bug in the last few episodes- so its a bummer that she died.