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Fic: Take Me Out To the Ball Game (Logan/Veronica) PG-13

Dec 31, 2007 00:52

Title: Take Me Out To the Ball Game
Author: Sarah :)
Pairing/Characters: Logan/Veronica, Cliff, Keith, Dick
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 2x22, Not Pictured, just to be safe, but nothing specific. This is futurefic!
Word Count: 5,600
Summary: Logan is the coach of his daughter’s T-ball team. Wackiness ensues.
Disclaimer: Not mine. Duh.
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dick, sarah_p, pg-13, cliff, sarah_p - mandyverse, keith, logan, veronica

Comments 51

tiguhgirl December 31 2007, 07:35:49 UTC

OMG! I can't believe how much I've missed Mandy! SQUEE! :D

This was great, Sarah! Loved it.

More please :)

sarah_p January 1 2008, 19:48:28 UTC

Eeeh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I always worry when so much time passes between parts, because I get really rusty from a writing standpoint, so this makes me glad. :) AND! There'll be more soon, actually, because that's what Roz requested, so that's what she shall have!

Thank you so much for reading! Yay! :)

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sarah_p January 1 2008, 19:52:36 UTC

Oh, MAN, how happy does it make me to see you comment on this? SO, SO HAPPY. The fact that there are people who KEEP reading these BOGGLES MY MIND--you, my dear, are FABULOUS.

And, yes, CLEARLY, the having two children does not deter from the car!sex. In fact, I feel like it encourages it...I mean, WHERE ELSE ARE THEY GOING TO GET THE CHANCE? ;)

Did you intentionally write her to be like a mini Lilly?

Oh, MAN, Sam! I love that you picked up on that! There totally was a point in When I Was A Child that I started that thought, so I thought I would nudge a little more here. You? ARE PERCEPTIVE.

This has made my DAY, so now I'm going to go off and be happy. YAY. THANK YOU SO MUCH! (ALSO, I heard that you were involved in the assistance in the song selection of a certain mix made for me by a certain person recently, and you did a FANTASTIC job, and you're adorable, and thank you for being you. So there! ;))

onceuponapillow December 31 2007, 08:53:28 UTC

It's official. I. Love. You. I couldn't stop laughing. This was so damn funny. I loved Veronica being a crazy sports mom and all the sexual innuendo that the kids-of course- didn't get. And the Matt/Mandy stuff was adorable.

Great fic!

sarah_p January 1 2008, 19:54:44 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! And, hee, you'd be surprised, after a while, at how HARD it is to think of decent sexual innuendos that kids can randomly bring up...I mean, there's going to be SOME POINT where there just aren't any more to butcher! ;)

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

rowanceleste December 31 2007, 09:14:32 UTC

I love you! Hee...backseat sex...Dick picking up Veronica...Logan being affronted that some boy lacked enough fear of him to actually kiss his daughter...Veronica being sports mad enough to threaten Keith over a bad call? Keith distracting Mandy from the 'moving vehicle'? LOL...its perfect!

sarah_p January 1 2008, 19:56:48 UTC

HI, ANITA! :D And, yay, I'm so glad that this one worked for you! Heh, Logan clearly needs to up his menacing!glare quota--I mean, he couldn't even deter a SECOND grader. What's the world coming to? ;)

THERE WILL BE MORE MANDY SOON. AND THEN, PROBABLY MORE SOON AFTER THAT. Thanks for getting all of these IDEAS started... :P

Thank you so much for reading! :D

rowanceleste January 2 2008, 03:04:30 UTC

THERE WILL BE MORE MANDY SOON. AND THEN, PROBABLY MORE SOON AFTER THAT. Thanks for getting all of these IDEAS started... :P

Thank you so much for reading! :D

YAY! MORE! *bounces*

afrocurl December 31 2007, 13:33:03 UTC

*snickers*

*snickers more*

Ok, I can so come up with more intelligent feedback than that. But first...I just need to laugh at bit more.

Firstly, thanks to Lizzy for letting you put Matt in here. I loved that scene with the two of them, and I will gladly ship Mandy/Matt in future fics from you. ;)

Veronica as the crazed sports mom worked so well, especially since Mandy slid into second base. Logan needs to do a better job of explaining the youth sports programs to Veronica before she has to get ejected from every one of Mandy's games in the future.

Mandy's still as clueless about sex as always, and I love her for it. The car moving by itself at the end--HEE!!!

I'd say more, but I have to leave now.

I'm glad that you had fun writing this. :)

sarah_p January 1 2008, 20:00:26 UTC

Well, first of all, you know you can ALWAYS say more. Like about how I went through EVERY SINGLE E-MAIL CORRESPONDENCE we made about this, *just* to make sure I didn't forget to include any of the requested items. ;) Some of them? NOT as easy to fit in as you'd think! Hee.

But, phew, I'm RELIEVED that you liked it! I hadn't realized how long it'd been since I wrote VM fic since I did that meme, but, yeah, a five month dry spell will make things difficult. Hee. Now I should be in the proper mindset to get the OTHER fic done relatively quickly--I'm in the ZONE!

Logan needs to do a better job of explaining the youth sports programs to Veronica before she has to get ejected from every one of Mandy's games in the future.SERIOUSLY. I mean, it's like he doesn't know his wife at ALL. I feel like everyone else saw that debacle coming from a mile away ( ... )

sarah_p January 1 2008, 20:01:42 UTC

PS: I'm assuming that you DIDN'T get to see the parade, since you probably had to be at the stadium early, but there was TOTALLY a Dodger float, and Tommy Lasorda was TOTALLY on it, and I TOTALLY cracked up a bunch and thought of you. I'm sure Mandy would have enjoyed it, too... ;)

afrocurl January 2 2008, 05:03:59 UTC

I DVRed the parade (and I caught some of it, but not all. I'll have to look for the Dodger float later when I watch.

We shall talk more about the next one...:)