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Fic: The Prodigal Daughter, Chapter 5 (Duncan, Veronica) PG

May 20, 2005 10:57

Title: The Prodigal Daughter, Chapter 5
Author: sadiekate
Pairing/Character: Duncan, Veronica
Word Count: 1,350
Rating: PG
Summary: Veronica and Duncan meet up for the first time in ten years.
Spoilers/Warnings: Through the finale.
Notes: Keeping it light, and trying to move the plot along as well … let me know what you think.

( He had changed in ways a newspaper photo could not convey in its grainy black and white. )

pg, sadiekate, sadiekate - the prodigal daughter, veronica, duncan

Comments 44

angela_o May 20 2005, 08:11:14 UTC

This continues to delight. There is something inherently awkward about meeting someone again who you used to know well and that gets conveyed very well here. I really loved the fact that Jake was proud of Duncan for his career choice. Maybe he did mean it when he told Celeste that he just wanted Duncan to be involved. I also liked the imagery of planets spinning off of their orbits. Lilly certainly burned brightly enough to rival a sun. Now, I can't wait to find out why Logan was trying to track Veronica down. Bring on the world's most awkward dinner party! (Although, should Weevil be invited to really make that the case? lol)

Thanks for more.

Angela

sadiekate May 20 2005, 08:27:00 UTC

Thanks for the awesome feedback!

interloper307 May 20 2005, 09:17:53 UTC

I am loving this and I want more.

That's really all I can say, because I'm still all giddy from reading it.

sadiekate May 20 2005, 09:28:34 UTC

Aww, thanks.

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sadiekate May 20 2005, 08:28:20 UTC

Thank you!

pixiee May 20 2005, 08:29:30 UTC

EEEE. What love I have for you and this story! Really, it's freakin' sweet! Thaaaaaaaank you kindly for it, and keep on goin'! 'Cause in my opinion, the goin's getting damn good.

sadiekate May 20 2005, 08:42:00 UTC

Thanks! I'm just looking forward to Logan showing up. Whenever I write him, he seems to have a mind of his own.

anonymous May 20 2005, 08:41:11 UTC

This sounds so much like Veronica & Duncan. Great job with the characters. Can't wait to read about the dinner party!! :) spk

sadiekate May 20 2005, 08:43:11 UTC

Thanks!

sexycereal May 20 2005, 09:01:39 UTC

Aw, I can't wait to see the dinner party! Rollll on chapter6!

sadiekate May 20 2005, 09:28:05 UTC

Aww, I'm such a fan of yours, that it makes me squee a little when you give me feedback. Or squee a lot, even.

sexycereal May 20 2005, 09:37:35 UTC

Aw, that's so cute. I really should give a lot more feedback - but I'm horribly lazy. And usually writing. This story however has caught my attention and had to get some love.

sadiekate May 20 2005, 09:42:32 UTC

Well, I appreciate it so much. I lurked in this community a long time before I started writing stuff myself, and I definitely try to give as much feedback as I can now, to make up for the days when I was shy and unregistered.