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Ficlet: "Parting Gift" (Logan/Veronica) PG-13

Jun 30, 2006 19:41

“Parting Gift”
By halfway2home

Disclaimer: I don’t own “Veronica Mars.” Rob’s the man.
Word Count: 1175
Rating: PG-13 for some cursing.
Pairing: Logan/Veronica
Spoilers: Through 2x06.
Setting/Summary: Post-1x22. “He wants to spend all his time with her and that is why it’s all going to blow up in his face.”
Author’s Note: Thank you, eolivet, as always. :))

( It's better than nothing. )

halfway2home, pg-13, veronica, logan

Comments 10

afrocurl July 1 2006, 02:49:27 UTC

Aww! Reading your account of how things feel apart was really painful, but beautiful at the same time.

I like the way that you have them bantering with each other, bust still being a couple--until the end that is.

Good job!

klawick003 July 1 2006, 02:52:25 UTC

Oh my god. Loved it. I liked how Logan knew that she was withdrawn and could sense a breakup, in a way. We see them playful, but even then, Logan knows she won't let him get to close. The end was pretty heartbreaking.

Great job!

rainyteardrops July 1 2006, 03:15:20 UTC

The end of this was really heart breaking, but the story was great... seriously. You are a fabulous writer :D

Nickole

perfect__weapon July 1 2006, 03:26:14 UTC

No.
That was heart breaking.
you should write a part two and they shouldn't break up.

*sniffles*

I did like it a lot. (tear)

He could do this, he could take care of her, forever... ziebra July 1 2006, 07:13:40 UTC

That was very tender and sweet, yet strained, very Logan....Excpet the ending only makes the title bittersweet.....Well done.

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Re: He could do this, he could take care of her, forever... ziebra July 6 2006, 06:07:10 UTC

Funny, I went to Santa Cruz on the 4th and got a pretty bad sunburn on my back and was reminded of this Fic... I wish I had an aloe wielding Logan ready and willing to take care of me.. frigging Veronica... Normal is so over-fricking-rated!!! And, Damn! I like your icon!!