Torchwood Paranormal, Part Fourteen

[veronicaluv]

Ready for another?

Comments

[fide_et_spe]

Oh no you killed Ianto! That was a fantastic chapter. I got very caught up in the environment, and the descriptions, I could feel Jack's anxiety. I'm very relieved Jack knows CPR.

[veronicaluv]

I did! But I'll fix him, I always do ;). Glad you enjoyed this chapter, it had to serve several purposes, so I was hoping it would come out coherently.

More soon (I hope!)!

[anjelmati]

Waah!!These days,I don't read any Torchwood,but yours has me riveted.Thank you for sharing.

[veronicaluv]

Aw, thank you for continuing to read this - nasty cliffhangers and all ;).

[withywindle01]

OMG! I hate you! *just kidding!* This is a fantastic chapter, and the idea of the ancient heartbeat in the earth... the mystery just keeps getting better!

[veronicaluv]

I know! I hate me, too! But I'll fix it - I'll fix Ianto - I promise ;).

[withywindle01]

Oh, I know you will...I have faith! *g*

[idamus]

NOOOOOOOOO
*Whimpers* fix now please :'(

[veronicaluv]

I know, I'm sorry :( - but it served a purpose, I promise it's all good!

[aphroditesky]

Intriguing cliffhanger... go on.. don't leave us hanging too long (my fingers are slipping, I feel I'm about to fall off)

:D

[veronicaluv]

Hang on! *tosses a rope* more on the way - I can't stand to leave it this way, either ;).