Comments | veronica_rich: New Fic: "Contradictions 9

veronica_rich

New Fic: "Contradictions 9 - Choices" Part 8

Mar 26, 2006 13:05

See Part 1 for disclaimers, etc.

( Lots of things aren't possible, and they keep happenin' every day. )

Comments 35

captsparrow4evr March 26 2006, 20:21:36 UTC

BRAVA!! Wonderful job. I do love your characterizations (as usual). I was literally holding my breath during the Triangle incident and I've never been so grateful to see Elizabeth in my life! (And that's saying something, considering.;) Now to go back and re-read the whole thing again. This was everything a good cup of hot chocolate should be: hot, sweet, spicy, rich and delicious. Thank you so much for this gift!

veronica_rich March 27 2006, 01:42:25 UTC

Awww. You've read the whole thing, all along, and I'm glad you've kept up. It's taken a while, hasn't it? LOL

Thanks for the feedback on the adventure part; I'm still not sure about it, but I'm happy someone liked it. (Now go finish your story ...)

___watermage March 26 2006, 23:03:47 UTC

What a perfect ending, as sad as I am to see the story completed, this piece is so wonderfully amazing. Your characterization is perfect, as always, especially the interactions between Jack and Will. Please tell me you're going to start a few new pieces now?

veronica_rich March 27 2006, 01:40:28 UTC

I don't know what's coming next. I'm done with this particular series; there may be drabbles or such on the horizon; hell, I may even finish another idea I started, with Old West AU Jack and Will ... but it remains to be seen. (I really need to get writing on original stuff, I always say.)

Thanks for reading and enjoying; I liked writing it hopefully as much as you enjoyed reading it.

obsidianromance March 27 2006, 01:16:40 UTC

Loved the story! I was so excited to read this!

Brilliant dialog and characterization! I loved all the intereactions between Jack and Will, and the flaws/strenghts you gave them. Great job!

veronica_rich March 27 2006, 01:37:34 UTC

Thanks for your feedback, and I'm glad you were happy to "jack in" (Matrix-speak) for one more installment. They're not always easy to write, even for all they are established characters, but I enjoy trying!

herm42 March 27 2006, 03:34:16 UTC

OMG. *covers eyes* You posted it....AND I CAN'T read it now!! arg! I have to go to bed and not stay up reading this deliciousness Ive been waiting for for what has felt like all eternity. And I'm going to spend all day at work tomorrow thinking about coming home and reading this.

veronica_rich March 29 2006, 19:58:26 UTC

I just hope your printer has enough ink. ;-)

pir8fancier March 27 2006, 04:35:11 UTC

What a wonderful story. So glad you finished it. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

veronica_rich March 27 2006, 13:57:30 UTC

Yay, writer love!

Thanks for reading yet another part. It took forever to write the whole damn thing, much longer than it should have. LOL