Challenge #3: The Rain

[titti]

Title: Watching the rain
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Don't own, don't sue
Character: Logan
Spoilers: The Return of Kane
Summary: Logan watches the rain fall
Word Count: 100

Comments

[titti]

Darn, I actually thought his hands were going for the pants. I had to go and rewatch that bit again. And can I say that it gives me more of the creeps because it would scare more.

[mareen]

I like it. :)

But in the episode you can actually see Logan pull off his shirt before his father closes the door, so we know he's getting beaten on the back, not the ass.

[titti]

I think that little change should fix it, and still 100 words. heh

[mareen]

oops. Sorry about the deleted comment. I thought I was fast enough. *G* Livejournal really, really needs an "edit" function.

[titti]

But when you want your message to go through, it never does. It's lj magic. LOL

[oxoniensis]

Great, sad little drabble. It captures the stoicism and resignation that we saw from him in that scene.

[titti]

Thank you. I've liked Logan from the start, but I fell in love with the character in that moment.