Tacenda [Got7]

[verocity]

Title: Tacenda [Chapter 3]
Main Character: Jaebum
Warnings: -none-
Rating: G
Word Count: 2,374
Summary: This is a story about things that should not be said.
Notes: New fandom, new writing style~ Although it looks like I'm slipping into the old one umm-

Comments

[anonymous]

I just want to say that I love this.
And I especially love your JB the confused but dealing leader and Mark the strong and silent one.
our lovely hyung-line... <3

[verocity]

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

Mark and JB are both such strong people, I'm intrigued at how differently they show their strengths. Writing about them is so much fun ^^

[mjallirow]

This is so good I wish I could articulate just how good but I'll have to think it through and come back later so for now, let me just say that this is incredibly good and seeing that you had updated made my heart somersault out of my chest okay
seriously such a different and interesting approach and your characterisation is so on point I can't deal <3

[verocity]

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

Got7 is such an interesting group, writing them is like getting to know who they are behind the scenes. We have so many clues from their shows but extrapolating from those clues is so much fun ^^

[mousharilla]

I manage out a sob or two after every chapter because I want to hug everyone. And maybe pat Jaebum's arm and tell him he's okay, and that he's doing well ^^

I love how you portray everyone here. This may sound like a generic compliment, but seriously. I love everyone. And that's *HARD* because not everyone gets enough screen (word?) time, and the fact that they each contribute to the story in their own way just UGH. I really love that about this story, how there's a relationship that's so established that it doesn't need to be explained but it's all still developing and all the little interactions hint at something more. Like it's REAL. Am I making sense? Anyway.

2000+ words isn't short, but the way you pace the story makes it go by in a blink. You are awesome. That is all. I would like to hug you too. So hug.

[mousharilla]

Okay. Random. YOU'RE BORN IN 86? Dood! We're the same age and I'm excited because I feel *old* amongst these insanely good writers who have barely hit 20 and their devoted followers who have just become legal.

Also. I was in Boracay in Jan. And t'was pwetty.

So anyway. Extra hug for being an 86-line ;)

[verocity]

Thank you for reading and commenting ^^

Yeah, the members are all doing their best to support each other here, although a lot of it is happening off screen. I want to hug them all too ^^

And thank you very much for the feedback! That is exactly the feel I'm aiming for with this fic: that relationships can be so established yet subtle, that every relationship has its own dynamics that sometimes nobody else can see. That simple actions can be banal to some people but can hold worlds of meaning to those who know the context of the relationship. The story I'm trying to write is about showing those little actions, painting around the things that they're not saying :)

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Yup, I'm an 86-line! It's great to meet someone my age around here! I've been feeling so old lol almost everyone else is from the 90s ahaha

Boracay is so pretty, yes, I was thinking of going back there sometime late this year. So many things worth returning for!

More power to 86-line! :D

[geniebsmart]

YES! I finally caught up with all the chapters so far :D

Okay, let me be honest: I know nothing about GOT7. There! I admitted it!

HOWEVER, I cannot tell you the depth of enjoyment I am experiencing from reading Tacenda, because 1) my vocab stinks and 2) my vocab stinks. LOL! Seriously, I'm just super happy that you are writing again and that my introduction to the fan fiction in the GOT7 fandom is through you.

Therefore, I look forward to the rest of this beautiful story. Keep up the awesome, and I pray I may provide more intellectual commentary in the next chapter hahaha!

[verocity]

GENIE!!! :D :D :D

Haha no worries, I also don't know Got7 that well, they're still relatively new ^^

I'm glad you enjoyed it! you could always express your enjoyment through music It's good to know that the story still stands even for those who aren't into the group yet ^^ Like... it assures me that I still wrote them as, like, human and not just idols (if that makes sense) lol

Haha I've gotten a lot slower in writing, I am so out of practice omg. But I guess getting back into the groove (using a new writing style, too) takes effort, as always. And I'm going to admit right now that most of my new fics will likely be about Got7 ahaha-

they ruined my life gdi

[saranghey_you]

I've read this story so many times, and though it is very well-written, i still don't understand what the heck is going on. Jinyoung likes/used to like Jaebum, but likes Youngjae now/too?

[panda_su]

From another readers perspective i think yes. At the point the story is set it feels like jinyoung's once upon a time one sided crush on Jaebum is nothing but friendship at this point, and his feelings are directed at youngjae now. Them talking about it at the end since more like a long over do conversation that need it to happen but neither had the courage to admit to it before this point.

Sorry for butting in lol