Tacenda [Got7]

[verocity]

Title: Tacenda [Chapter 1]
Main Character: Jaebum
Warnings: -none-
Rating: G
Word Count: 2,464
Summary: This is a story about things that should not be said.
Notes: New fandom, new writing style~

Comments

[horrours]

chapter 1
tbc

chapter 1
tbc

SO THIS IS THE ANGST YOU WERE WORKING ON THAT GOT OUT OF HAND
which i still owe you porn for oops i swear it will happen

bless this writing
i love it
goodbye

[verocity]

Miia~ Haha yeah, this is the fic ^^ There's still so much of it to be written though, and I'm still getting back into the finficcer mindset after not having written seriously for so long.

And

I await the porn. Very much. Yes.

[quotidianue]

????!!!!
wait hang on spot spot SPOT I'm going to be back and I'm going to comment!

(I need to go sleep now and I'd rather not rush my comment)

[quotidianue]

I'm back!
.... days later, but I'm back nonetheless.

Okay I think first and foremost what I like the most about this (chapter?? there's more oh my goodness I'm excited) is how the combination of your writing style + characterisation makes everything blend together so SMOOTHLY and it doesn't feel a single bit out of place. The characterisation of everyone is on point, from Jackson's very ~uncontrollable~ personality with that hint of thoughtfulness to the thoughtful maknaes, and of course JB and JR's dynamic. They interact so seamlessly with each other which has me really envious because how to handle multiple characters in one setting ;A;A;A;

Plus the storyline itself doesn't feel overdone or unrealistic?? it's very realistic without any unneeded glamor and from the get-go my attention is captured and the anticipation just increased more and more

-- oh goodness I'm babbling here, but long story short I absolutely adore this and I will return to it over and over in the future, guaranteed

thanks for writing!

[verocity]

Welcome back~ ^^ And thank you for reading and commenting!

There'll be quite a bit more, I've been playing with the story for some time in my head. The writing style is new for me as is the group, thank you for the wonderful feedback ^^ I've been a huge fan of the JB/JR dynamic since JJ Project days, it's great to finally be writing it. Plus all the other members. Got7 really got me ahaha ^^

I've always liked realism in my fics, I'm glad to know I'm capturing it properly ^^ I will do my best to write better!

And babbling is always welcome here, no worries ahaha!

[xfragments]

IM SCREAMING this is so gorgeous AND ALSO CAUSE JB IS MY BIAS. it's raw and realistic in the most simple way. Stories like these are hard to write but you did a great job. <3

I love the jaebum/jinyoung best friend flashbacks. And all the bambam moments were precious.

Can't wait for the update, I'm excited to see where this story goes.

[verocity]

Thank you for reading and commenting~ I've been slightly JB-biased since Dream High 2 days and I'm happy to finally be able to write him ^^

I'm new to the "raw and realistic" style, thank you for the support ^^ I hope to write even better with it soon and feedback is always appreciated ^^ As for the story... I've got plans for it, please stay tuned~

[symmetrophobic]

IDEK WHAT TO SAY OK IM LIKE FREAKING OUT OVER THIS FIC LIKE OMGGGGG

[verocity]

OMG THANK YOU ;~; seriously i have no idea how to respond to this comment bc so much love for it???

Got7 is the first group that I truly fully liked. As in I feel for all the members and I love their dynamics and I love learning new things about them everyday. I can't even make up my mind about bias bc how to bias all 7 of them???

Knowing that my fic dynamics/characterization shows them is just ♥♥♥ And I've been into JJ Project since their debut which isn't actually accurate because I've been into Jaebum and Jinyoung ever since Dream High 2 and those two have been playing in my head for so long and it feels great to finally write about them.

I'm still developing this style of writing and I've been on hiatus for a while, but having a wonderful group to write for is doing wonders for reimmersing in fanfic ^^

Thank you for reading and for leaving a wonderful comment, I'll keep honing my style so the next chapters get better and better (although maybe kinda heavier bc this is not going to be a happy fic umm-)

[anonymous]

When I read 'TBC' I didnt know whether to be sad that it ended, or happy that there's a continuation. THIS FIC WINS ALL THE AWARDS. I am soooo happy I came across it even when it's already 2:19am where I'm at.

I love the writing style. It's very easy and quick to read like I didn't even notice I have finished (I really wish I didn't I need more of this story). Characterization is amazing T^T esp just after JB's 4 Things broadcast, this makes me feel 98 times emotional about JB's leader character. DONT EVEN GET ME STARTED ON JJ PROJECT. O T P. JJ parents are seriously, I love them so much and their relationship in this fic is very genuine. Not very far from real life. Actually, everything is so realistic. Maybe that's why I'm so emotional.

Thanks. This fic made my day. Or two. I hope to read the next part!
PS bambam is so cute

-rf

[verocity]

Thank you! For reading and for the lovely comment ;~;

Wonderful timing though bc I just posted the next installment? ahaha /fails at pimping fic

Thank you for the feedback on my writing style, I'm trying to develop it further ^^ And when I learned about JB's broadcast I was kind of anxious bc what if my characterization is wrong omg! I haven't watched it yet though, that's my plan for the weekend ahaha- /anxious

I've been a huge fan of JJ Parents since DH2, tbh! It feels great that I'm finally writing about them, plus all the members of Got7 ^^