Those Meddling Kids! (Chapter 4)
Title: Those Meddling Kids! (Chapter 4)
Author: 7dragon_Zodiac / Verocity
Fandom: Super Junior, Dong Bang Shin Ki
Featuring: KiBum, ChangMin, YeSung, EunHyuk, RyeoWook, JunSu, JaeJoong, YunHo
Pairings: KiBum [Super Junior] x ChangMin [DBSK]; EunHyuk x RyeoWook
Rating: I’m pretty sure it’s still G, but sexis mentioned very briefly.
Warnings: The ( Read more... )
Author: 7dragon_Zodiac / Verocity
Fandom: Super Junior, Dong Bang Shin Ki
Featuring: KiBum, ChangMin, YeSung, EunHyuk, RyeoWook, JunSu, JaeJoong, YunHo
Pairings: KiBum [Super Junior] x ChangMin [DBSK]; EunHyuk x RyeoWook
Rating: I’m pretty sure it’s still G, but sexis mentioned very briefly.
Warnings: The ( Read more... )
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Please write more!
(sorry! English isn't my first langage, so I don't know how to express.XD)
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Hehe, I can relate with your situation. English isn't my first language either, and it was very frustrating when I was still learning. :D I have a hard time learning languages T.T
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I don't even brave enough to write something in English!
Please paste the Fifth soon, someone is dying to read!!
FIGHTING!!!
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I've readed the story again.
Sorry! I just adored it! XD
A question came and popped up when I read again as if how the rest of team members of DBSK and SJ knew the KiBum is the subject of ChangMin's affections, and they cooperated and accepted it?
And the most important was that HOW KiBum noticed the difference that ChangMin showed?
I was confused...xp
Would you be able to descript more in details?
BTW, Can you read Mandarin?
In fact, there has few stories written in Mandarin, as ChangBum Couple, you might like to read..XD (just let you know... nothing important)
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About ChangMin's affections: Ermm... Honestly, I suppose that's part of the backstory that I didn't put much thought to. I just worked off the premise that ChangMin likes KiBum and the people who matter to them know it. But now that you mention it, I think that's a story that's also worth exploring. It could be a sequel of sorts, or I can explore it in the further chapters. We'll see :D
About how KiBum noticed the difference in ChangMin... I apologize most profusely, but I'm afraid I don't understand the entirety of the question T.T Which difference, and about what? I'll answer as soon as I understand :D
About reading Mandarin: ... I took a few lessons a few years ago, but unfortunately I haven't practiced in so long. However, if there's good ChangMin x KiBum fanfic to be read, that may be motivation to continue studying/practicing Mandarin XD
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Thanks again for replying my questions!?
Really, hope you don't mind!
About ChangMin's affections:
>> Um..it may not need to write a sequel to descrip it, as it was ONLY my confusion, but if you can back up more about it, hell, WHY NOT! XD
>> In fact, I just would like to know "HOW & WHY" ChangMin realized he's in love with KiBum.(We all knew KiBum is loveble, right?). But if you can mention this in detail within next following chapters, it might help. xp
To the 2nd questions:
>> Sorry about my poor English!
Again, I would also like to know "HOW & WHEN" KiBum noticed ChangMin's in LOVE with him. He must have felt something, right?
>> For example, when somebody likes or dislikes you, you will, of cause, notice the difference.
Does it help?
Sorry to trouble you again!
Mandarin:
>> No worries! XD
As there has a Group in BAIDU named "ChangBum", do have some pretty good stories...(he he..I am one of the readers XD)
Finally, thank you very much for replying my question, and hope you really don't mind.
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About ChangMin's affections:
Hmmm... about the other members finding out... I could write a side-story about it. Honestly, it would be great to explore the other members' point of view about the developing romance. I'll try to work it into the current story. There'll be a scene in a future chapter regarding JaeJoong and how he learns of ChangMin's feelings. But we'll get to that soon.
As for how ChangMin fell for KiBum... Thank you very much for point out that plot hole! <3 <3 <3 I didn't even realize I haven't addressed it yet in the fic, and I really must write a prologue for the fic about how and why ChangMin fell for KiBum. Since the fic deals with their relationship, I really should tell the story of how it began, and it would also address how KiBum noticed it ( ... )
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