Brought by the not-so-popular demands of Amanda, Kyle, and Sarah... here is my crappy poem. Amanda loved it but I'm so critic on my writting. ( Guardian Angel )
OMG Veronica!!!!! that poem is so kick ass...thats the best poem I've ever read and what makes it so great is that its from your heart..you feel all these things and I totally understand how you feel and I'm so sorry hun but it's seriously the best poem I've ever read and I'm not just saying that...I'm very critical when it comes to writing
Reaalllllly? I'm glad you liked it!!! That made me feel relaly good, like I commented to Kyle, I think it's too redoundant and could use a lot of work but I'm happy you liked it a lot. It was from the heart. I meant every single word.
I do'nt think it's that great I think it's weird for some reasons. I mean I like some lines, but all of it colletively seems redoundant to me and I don't know, I'm so critical. Yeah, I think of things like that all the time. I just get ditzy around people sometimes all the time but I'm a real deep person. Eek.
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You think of weird things, but they sound amazing.
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