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vermilioncream

Growing up - Chapter 8

Mar 17, 2013 22:32

Summary: Naruto is a young boy who tragically loses his parents and as a result has to move in with his new adoptive family - the Uchiha family. How will his relationship with young Sasuke develop as they grow up? AU, multi-chapter.

Warning: This is a yaoi fanfiction. If you are offended by that or if you are not the proper age, don’t read.
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rating | adult/nc-17 or above, misc | anime, genre | romance

Comments 6

zinnia_23 March 18 2013, 04:38:42 UTC

Nicely written. too many heart attack moments (thank goodness for the bell!! Heck i needed the bathroom myself ;))

Okay...! for a moment there i thought that the truck will hit itachi and that it was a message from Orochimaru to fugaku to back off. Phew!!

I guess we are on the romance for Itachi now? will he ever travel? Hinata? Isnt she rather quiet for our repressed 1st born? Hmmm! Questions abound.

hugs

vermilioncream March 18 2013, 21:51:38 UTC

I wanted to give Itachi a near death experience which would shake him out of his trance and give him an incentive to actually look for happiness in his life. However I would never kill him :D
The initial plan I had for him didn't include love, but a reader suggested I introduce Hinata in his life, so after some thinking I figured it wasn't so difficult to alter my initial plan in order to include her.
Thanks for reading and reviewing
xoxo

luel_exana March 23 2013, 02:22:53 UTC

So today, you are my personal hero. I just spent the evening reading the Naruto fics you wrote, and I'm so glad I found them. Because you're awesome. And I'm going to be lazy, and combining comments for Growing Up and The First Time/Figuring Things Out, but... damn. They were all very well written, and I never would have guessed that English isn't your first language. Because what you wrote not only has better themes and plot and characterization, but better writing quality too, than a lot of native English speakers writing in this fandom. I salute you madame ( ... )

vermilioncream March 23 2013, 20:36:23 UTC

Oh my god! If my fanfictions made your day, well your review has definitely made mine :D I am a little speechless right now. I'm so very very happy that you like my writing and that I was actually able to influence another's person mood...wow it feels great :D
I also like sweet Sasuke as opposed to mean and vengeful Sasuke. I'm glad you like the plot of Growing up. It is my first multi-chapter and I was very impressed at how well it has been received.
Thank you so much for reading my work and for leaving this wonderful review - I must confess I was feeling a little down when I was reading it, but by the time I finished I was feeling tones better. Thank you and read on! xoxo

luel_exana March 24 2013, 12:25:50 UTC

I am only returning the favour, since at the time of reading your fics, I was feeling a little down myself... Though mostly for stupid reasons, such as "I just watched thirty episodes of Naruto in a row, and it's painfully obvious how much Naruto loves Sasuke, and Sasuke doesn't care.... ow my heart." So only fanfiction could fix this for now. haha So thanks for cheering ME up! XDb You're doing a great job on your first multi-chapter fic!

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