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bigtitch April 28 2009, 07:07:11 UTC
I was thoroughly enjoying this reunion (you have them spot on) and then this:
hesitant voices repeated a vow that intertwined two human and two draconic lives together till they were no more.
That just broke me.
*sniffle*

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verito295 April 29 2009, 03:01:25 UTC
*beams happily*
Im really lad you think they are IC, itʼs always one of my biggest worries wen I write :)
*huggles you*
Sorry about the breaking part, hope you're all ok now :D

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fififolle April 28 2009, 07:17:03 UTC
Ohhhhh! *sniff* So beautiful! *claps*

“You have the worst sodding timing in history, Jon. Why the fuck didn’t you say a word about it before?”
My heart was just breaking for them, everything that's happened, and Ryan avoiding him, and oh! What a good story. 'the sodding text message' OH! *huggles Ryan*

Wonderful passionate tender poetic love scene *happysigh* with added harness callouses rrrrrr

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verito295 April 29 2009, 03:09:34 UTC
*huggles you*
They're going to be ok now on, men or not, they're not tat dumb to fuck up twice :)

I think I might be developing a bit of a kink about harness calloused hands :D

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fififolle April 29 2009, 18:54:25 UTC
Me too... *wipes drool*

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telperion_15 April 28 2009, 07:25:31 UTC
*takes deep breath*

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, I think that pretty much sums it up... *g*

OMG, the fighting and harsh words, I was totally hiding behind my hands...and then the scorching hot and wonderfully sweet make-up sex basically killed me!

*iz ded*

*glomps you*

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verito295 April 29 2009, 03:18:46 UTC
*giggles and covers her ears against the squee*

Well I can say tat I'm lard you liked it :D
honestly, I knew they needed to fight, between the months of worry and the sodding text message and Lyle being the smart mouth tat e is there was no way out of it but it was wort it :)

*checks if you're revived yet*

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lukadreaming April 28 2009, 11:56:03 UTC
Yibble! Beautiful chapter! I was totally agreeing with Rosa that men are morons when they were fighting and arguing. And then the super-duper hot make-up sex . . . *Sniffs delicately*

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verito295 April 29 2009, 03:20:47 UTC
LOL Rosa was totally right, good thing her CO at least knows it too deep down :)

*bounce* So happy you enjoyed te story on, only one more c apter to o.

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kristen_mara April 28 2009, 12:10:57 UTC

Reunion! SmartMouthLyle! Insults! Fisticuffs! Shag and make up! *cheering*

Love Ryan's crew and dragon vanishing with all speed. I can picture them all in an hour standing around, going, "Do you think it's safe to go back in there yet?" "Yes, but let's make lots of noise, just in case..."

////“Hoy! Speak for yourself. I was the one who came clean about this; if I’d left it to you we’d probably still be playing silly sods ten years from now.”////

Hee, and lovely hot and sweet ending.

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verito295 April 29 2009, 03:27:15 UTC
LOL See? I promised it'd happen didn't I? :D

Actually I think Ryans crew is smart enough to live them till the next day, the dragons possibly not ;)
but that is next weeks final chapter

Thank you very much, I was a little worried it might be a tad too sweet but they deserved it after everything.

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