Fic: Kiss a Boy in Tokyo Town, Percy Jackson [Part 7/7]

[antistar_e]

Comments

[greenconverses]

Holy shit, HOW DO YOU WRITE AWESOME ALL. THE. TIME???

I just, I know should've commented on this when I first read it, but it took me a while just to digest everything that happened in this fic and not come off as a crazy crazy fan girl LIKE YOUR FAN FICS ALWAYS MAKE ME DO. So clearly I failed hardcore.

Anyway, I just loved everything. Especially the way you handled the Percy/Annabeth, Percy/Nico triangle because there's no way that it couldn't end without someone getting hurt and you made it work so well and believable for their characters in the end.

"You're still the only person who knows where my vulnerable spot is." He feels her smile against his cheek, knowing that she knows what he's trying to say.

THIS BROKE ME because it says so much about Percy and Annabeth's relationship in this fic, and so much about Percy's character and just AKJSLAKJKA.

Also? I want to run away the Justins and all your OC half-bloods. They were so adorable and perfect. And putting the setting in Japan? Guh. Awesome.

So, in short, I agree: FANDOM

[antistar_e]

Ha! I was actually really nervous when I realized where the fic was going and that it contained so much Percy/Annabeth, when the prompt was Percy/Nico, and then I was like, "Wait. It's greenconverses's prompt. She won't mind."

ALSO. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW CLOSE THIS CAME TO BEING ANNABETH/PERCY/NICO FLAVORED. I blame you. Entirely. In the nicest possible way.

So, no. I am no fandom queen :D:D:D THAT TITLE WILL ALWAYS BELONG TO YOU. y/y.

[ad_exia]

I don't even know what to say, other than this was amazing and I am horribly, horribly depressed that I HAVE NO MORE TO READ. Maybe I can write you a better review later, but I almost have no words right now. The ending and the whole demon thing and everything Nico said was just amazing and it made me get all teary-eyed a bajillion times and I love love love loved it. <3

[antistar_e]

♥♥♥

[ad_exia]

You know, I totally had a dream last night where I was in Japan. And I think Percy was there too. I'm pretty sure that's all your fault.

Pushing Daiiiiisies~

[ezyls_girl]

♥♥♥

I totally just stole binmusic's layout, but you deserve like a huge piece of awesome cake just for writing 60000 Percy/Nico. It's like RS ALL OVER AGAIN OMG ILY. a;slkdjfa

[antistar_e]

fjdksjfirncksdm THE AWESOME CAKE IS ALL YOURS. ♥♥♥

[ext_181667]

So I love you and hate you at the same time, because I just read this entire thing in one sitting--that's right. Greenconverses can definitely attest to that because I've been talking with her this whole time about how fucking amazing this story is. How can you write like thattttttt? And do it in such a short time span?! I love the characterization in this fic; I mean, you've got Percy down to a T. And it's hilarious. The dialogue is hilarious. I love the fact that this is in Japan, and the setting is so vivid and convincing, it's like you've lived there your whole life (I don't know if you have).

I rarely ever read slashfic, but this one was so good. Even though my heart kind of broke because I am forever a Percy/Annabeth shipper, and I about cried when I read the question about whether or not they'd be in love if they weren't in a prophecy together.

Write more. I seriously don't know what else to read at this point because everything else is a candleflame to the sun in comparison to your writing.

-Icy Roses.

[antistar_e]

jdifjdkschiejfs. I. I. *blushes FOREVER* I don't even know what to SAY, that's just -- GAH, THANK YOU. As for the short time span: I worked my ass off, so I am so, so, so glad you like it. It makes every little stress worth it =DDD

And yeah, I ship Percy/Annabeth so hard, too, but it seems to be every time I sit down to write them, it goes all slashy on me, so. What can you do.

Again, thank you! ♥♥

[anonymous]

<3
It's 3 AM and my heart is aching, and I loved. this. fic.
The awesome halfblood OCs, and the sort of everyday-apocalyptic-setup of it, the switch to Japan and all, and Nico the king of the dead in his jacket and mismatched sneakers, and the way Percy and Nico were when they were together, sightseeing and bantering, and Percy Jackson's 20-year-old mid-life crisis after saving the world so many times... Awesome. Just...overall awesome. True to the spirit of the books, but grown-up, and all of it... just ... <3

(--random lurker who tends to read random fics in random fandoms the middle of the night and loves finding gems)

[antistar_e]

♥! And it's random lurkers like you that read random fics and leave random comments that make the people who write these fics so ridiculously happy. Thank you!