Fic: The Sister [Star Trek]

Jun 01, 2013 20:12

Title: The Sister
Fandom: Star Trek (reboot 'verse)
Characters/Pairings: Uhura (background Uhura/Spock)
Summary: The last conversation she ever has goes like this.
Word Count: 3,000
Notes: For the fic war over on Tumblr, where the challenge was to write something emotionally devastating. chipped_diamond asked me for Uhura on a suicide mission. SPOILERS for Into ( Read more... )

character: nyota uhura, rating: pg, fandom: star trek, pairing: uhura/spock

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redbrunja June 2 2013, 04:00:55 UTC
the challenge was to write something emotionally devastating.

You totally succeeded. Damn you!

Ugh, my emotions!

Oh, god, did Spock feel her die? At first I thought it was Jim screaming, but then I had that thought. Also, Jim is totally going to 100% completely destroy that ship. Alien species, you are certainly extinct NOW.

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antistar_e July 13 2013, 21:45:36 UTC
PRETTY MUCH!! Unhappy endings for everyone D:

Oh, god, did Spock feel her die? At first I thought it was Jim screaming, but then I had that thought.

!! ouch, um, I didn't think of that. It could have been any one of those on bridge, since Uhura's priceless to them in her own way.

But!! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, but seriously, thank you so much for the comment! :D

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chipped_diamond June 2 2013, 05:54:39 UTC
OP here. I don't know how to feel. I made this prompt with the expectation that however Uhura was going to go, it was going to be her decision. She would stare Death in the face - but here, she didn't see it coming at all. And - shit, that's the most tragic thing. Dying without a cause, dying not even knowing she was going to. And just, to learn so much about a person, not to mention about all the people revolving around her life, only to have that axis ripped away so unexpectedly and senselessly, I can only imagine too well the void left in the people close to her, the void in the universe where she should have been, because I feel it too.

Emotionally devastating. You succeeded, damn you.

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chipped_diamond June 2 2013, 05:55:57 UTC
Also, if I can super fangirl for a moment, you answered my prompt. THAT IS SO COOL.

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antistar_e July 16 2013, 22:19:43 UTC
fjdkljfidsjflkdgfd I'm so sorry this reply is so late, but oh my god, thank you for such a difficult prompt! It was really hard to come up with a scenario on which Uhura would go on a suicide mission, because I feel like a) after Jim and Spock did it to her in Into Darkness, Uhura simply wouldn't let it get to that point, and b) even if it did, Kirk and Spock would pull rank on her and go in her place, so I went with avenue c) go with the idea that the Enterprise's mission IS a gambit that could easily get everyone killed in and of itself, and simply choosing to be part of the crew, day after day, is as brave as willingly deciding to go to your death. Maybe it isn't as grand as saving the universe against Nero or Khan, but it's pretty important, nonetheless.

But, man, I don't want to kill Uhura ever again ;____; that was painful to write.

Thanks again for such a lovely comment!! ♥

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ohmeguro June 4 2013, 10:36:15 UTC
how could you do this to me

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antistar_e July 13 2013, 21:31:48 UTC
SORRY VIVS D: D:

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callunavulgari June 20 2013, 02:00:05 UTC
Oh, ouuuuuch. I've had this in my tabslist forever and just got around to it and just. Damn, you really know how to rend hearts in two. (But in a good way.)

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antistar_e July 13 2013, 21:36:04 UTC
Never let me kill off Uhura again, Heather, it just feels so completely wrong I DON'T LIKE THIS GAME D: D: But thank you, you're so lovely and I always appreciate it! ♥

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