When Darkness Falls, Chapter 10

Jul 12, 2011 17:27

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veritas_st July 12 2011, 18:02:02 UTC
Ok is it bad that I am kind of glad you said that? because that's what it felt like to me too, even though I wasn't consciously rushing.

I dunno...*is not happy about it*

I also suck at ending things and I can ramble for pages and pages and then I get to the point where I'm like SHIT gotta fucking ending this crap and bam...I end it. Its one of my downfalls. (one of the many!)

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veritas_st July 13 2011, 07:47:41 UTC
*headdesk*

Ok I feel bad now...actually contemplating pulling it

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trintiff July 12 2011, 19:36:18 UTC
Fucking Brilliant! Weaving it back into canon; even down to the detail of Brian and Mikey waiting in the hallway! Invoking Custodia gave me chills coz' then I knew how much Brian loved Justin; killing Ethan, snapping his neck with Brian's bare hands ... well, that was just delightful! I enjoyed the whole chapter immensely!

Now, young lady, about this "this is the end because I have so much other fic in my brain that needs to get out" bullshit! I'll cut you some slack and let you free your mind of that stuff but when that's all gone I am demanding expecting you to start working on Part 2! There's A LOT more to be told in this story! A whole lot more! Don't think your loyal fans will forget ... we won't! :-D (there's a great compliment somewhere in that paragraph!) LOL

Huge Hugs!! Cindy

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veritas_st July 12 2011, 21:10:58 UTC
Glad you liked the Ethan death, I had thought it was too sudden, but then I didn't think he deserved a long drawn out death scene! *grins*

Anyway, glad you enjoyed it darling.

Part two is already in my head (honestly I have so many fucknig fics in there right now its a wonder I can walk and breathe at the same time!) but it will take a few weeks (at least) till anything is written! But it will be written, this story isnt done yet, promise!

xx

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yvonnereid July 12 2011, 21:05:47 UTC
I am so sad that this is the end,im gonna miss this story alot,I have enjoyed it all so much,thank you from the bottom of my heart :)

Huge Hugs Vonnie xxx

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veritas_st July 12 2011, 21:09:17 UTC
Its not the end end Vonnie, just the end of this bit! So glad you have enjoyed it though darling

xxxx

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rulisteningbj July 12 2011, 22:40:55 UTC
No, this can't be over. This is too good of a story to be over. We have to have more. Please say you will continue after you get the rest of that other stuff out of your head.

Thanks for a beautiful story.

Dee Dee

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veritas_st July 13 2011, 07:48:15 UTC
Its only over for the moment sweetheart.

*hugs*

Thank you for reading and sticking with me

xxx

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sjmpets July 13 2011, 00:46:09 UTC
not meaning to you left us with a cliff hanger. i kind of think justin would be happy with custodia.
this chapter had the blood pumping. ethan snapped like a twig, and i loved how you bought the bashing into play. there is so much more to cover. if you can make your other stories into drabbles i would be eternally grateful.

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veritas_st July 13 2011, 07:58:00 UTC
Its a good cliff hanger though, leaves it open in a good way. And I do have another part to write so...

Glad you enjoyed this.

xx

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