I'm A Mess And You're Oh So Clear

[veritas_st]

Title taken from Sepiamusic's awesome tune Make This Easier (which you should all listen to).

I don't know what I feel, you need close, but you never get near, I'm a mess and you're oh so clear, so God please make this easier...This is not happy, it has a hopeful ending, but it has Broken!Justin, and what could be loosely described as

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[mrstotten]

Brian’s lips tingled where Justin had kissed him and his fingers itched to touch his skin, to run down his sides and watched the way he would twitch as they ran over his ribs. Brian wanted to fuck him, wake up smelling of Justin and shower plastered together, pressing Justin into the cool glass.

Oh my poor broken babies, love this as it reminded me that Brian wants Justin, Brian NEEDS Justin, that it isnt all about looking after him

You’re all I see. Justin needed Brian to see that, needed Brian to know that he was mostly himself when Brian was touching him, he felt the fog lifting when Brian was close.

“No.” Brian pushed him away. Justin felt him slipping through his fingers. ,

oh my poor poor poorn broken boys, I love that without Justins words pushing them Brian cant figure out what he wants

There was noise, too much noise, flashes of colour and images catching his eye as Justin walked through the crowd, pushing his way through the sea of people with one objective on his mind. Brian. He needed to find Brian, Brian who made

[veritas_st]

Is it bad that I love the broken boys?

SOO glad you liked it and thank you for holding my hand when I was wibbling. This was HARD and you made it easier just by being you and being the awesome constant cheerleader that you are.

Love you so much baby girl

xxx

[toto_too514]

Wow!

Sad. Powerful. Riveting. Heart-breaking. Exhilarating...

Oh, who am I kidding... even a complete thesaurus wouldn't be enough to describe how I felt reading this!

And, no... I don't think it's bad that you like broken boys... as long as you fix 'em!

[veritas_st]

I (mostly) always fix them! Just like breaknig them a little bit

So glad you liked this though, thank you for reading and reviewing and your kind words

xxx

[mander3_swish]

Ditto to mrstotten's comments! :)
Gripping, sad, hopeful, beautiful angst.

“Need you Brian.” Seriously Brian...but I think he got the hint.

mwah!

[veritas_st]

He eventually got it. Thank you so much for reading hun, glad you liked it.

*hearts your icon*

xxx

[magicalrachel]

Everything about this is utterly shattering and beautifully written. It's raw and it *hurts*. I believed every word.

[veritas_st]

Aww thank you so much for saying you believed it. It was a bit of a challenge that I didn't think through before I started writing it, but I am so glad you enjoyed it and felt. Thank you

[anno53]

Wow! This is such a real authentic story ... and you write it beautifully!

[veritas_st]

*blushes* thank you so much

So glad you enjoyed it

xx

[yvonnereid]

Wow,such an amazing story,I really enjoyed it even if it was heart breaking.

[veritas_st]

Thank you sweetheart, glad you liked it. It was a bitch to write!