LJ Idol 10 - Week 2 - That One Friend

[veritas_st]

The rule was explained to him when he was 11, red faced with embarrassment and anger. His mama sat him down and paced in front of him, then crouched and took his small hands in hers. She always smelled of sugar and flour, he remembers that now, the smell coming to him like a dream

Comments

[magazhchi]

*claps* Yay! To happy endings. I got completely hooked to your characters.

[veritas_st]

Thank you lovely! this weeks prompts picks back up with them!

[garnigal]

Oh, this is amazing and beautiful.

[veritas_st]

Aww bless you! xx

[swirlsofblue]

This is utterly heartbreaking. I cried. The way the scenes unfold make the whole thing so visceral and vibrant and real and sorrowful. It really earned its happy ending. An amazing piece.

[veritas_st]

I do love tears... i have to say. Thank you for reading and I am so glad you liked my babies! xx

[alycewilson]

I loved this story. I did get a little lost, however, near the end, because their names were both three letters and both characters seemed so similar. Maybe if it had been told in first person that would have been easier on the reader. Still, nice job!

[veritas_st]

I'm glad you liked it. Sorry you got lost but you will never see first person from me!
xx

[karmasoup]

So touching. So tender. Just beautiful.

[veritas_st]

Thank you lovely x