Underground

Mar 08, 2012 22:54

Author: veritas6_5
Pairings: OT3
Word count: 4,177
Rating: T
Disclaimer: I just took them out to play with them, and I dropped them. I’ll put them back!
Beta: The lovely Harkpad.

A/N: Still struggling with that old devil POV. Special thanks for the efforts of Karaokegal to help me understand it!

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gwen, ianto, jack

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firesnap March 9 2012, 07:16:17 UTC
I haven't even read yet. I just saw the title and the characters and made such a delighted noise that I woke up my cat. Be back after I read.

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Underground veritas6_5 March 9 2012, 07:25:57 UTC
I'm so happy to hear that from you!

I'm also very excited to hear that you and Harkpad may actually meet for coffee (or?).

Can't wait to hear what you think!

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Re: Underground firesnap March 9 2012, 07:37:34 UTC
Oh my goodness I loved it. It was great to see Jack and Ianto getting to be Gwen's big heroes for once. And everyone was so affectionate to each other -- you know how much I love that. I'm serious, you rarely get to see Gwen in a vulnerable place like this in fanfic and it was so refreshing. It's great to emphasize that it never mattered which of them was in need -- they pulled together and took care of each other. Oh, those three.

It was a sweet little adventure with a good mix of funny and cute moments. Completely worth waking the cat (he's already sleeping again). Also, I've had writer's block since I got the flu a few weeks back and this was just what I needed to read right now. I'll stop fawning.

And yeah, we were talking of getting coffee! Haven't set a date yet, but hopefully soon!

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Re: Underground veritas6_5 March 9 2012, 07:59:49 UTC
Thank you so very much for the fawning. I've really enjoyed it!

My cat also expressed his surprise to find that I finished something in a short time, but it was just one of those things that had to get out there. Thanks for your comments!

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51stcenturyfox March 9 2012, 14:27:45 UTC
Oh, this is great! I agree with firesnap; it's rare to see stories where Gwen is vulnerable instead of worried about somebody else.

Nicely realistic scene-setting too, down to the rank taste of the water and the cold. Poor things. <3

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veritas6_5 March 9 2012, 17:14:08 UTC
Thank you. I appreciate your opinion!

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evalentine99 March 9 2012, 20:27:21 UTC
Very good. LIked that Gwen was not the harpy and was hte one hurt.
Great stuff

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veritas6_5 March 10 2012, 19:45:54 UTC
Thank you very much!

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aviv_b March 10 2012, 13:47:42 UTC
Nicely done - I really like all the details - the iron taste of the water, the scrape of Gwen's body as they life her to the higher part of the cave - it makes the story much more compelling.

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veritas6_5 March 10 2012, 19:46:54 UTC
Thank you for your comment. And thanks for reading!

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