Underground

[veritas6_5]

Author: veritas6_5
Pairings: OT3
Word count: 4,177
Rating: T
Disclaimer: I just took them out to play with them, and I dropped them. I’ll put them back!
Beta: The lovely Harkpad.

A/N: Still struggling with that old devil POV. Special thanks for the efforts of Karaokegal to help me understand it!

Comments

[firesnap]

I haven't even read yet. I just saw the title and the characters and made such a delighted noise that I woke up my cat. Be back after I read.

Underground

[veritas6_5]

I'm so happy to hear that from you!

I'm also very excited to hear that you and Harkpad may actually meet for coffee (or?).

Can't wait to hear what you think!

Re: Underground

[firesnap]

Oh my goodness I loved it. It was great to see Jack and Ianto getting to be Gwen's big heroes for once. And everyone was so affectionate to each other -- you know how much I love that. I'm serious, you rarely get to see Gwen in a vulnerable place like this in fanfic and it was so refreshing. It's great to emphasize that it never mattered which of them was in need -- they pulled together and took care of each other. Oh, those three.

It was a sweet little adventure with a good mix of funny and cute moments. Completely worth waking the cat (he's already sleeping again). Also, I've had writer's block since I got the flu a few weeks back and this was just what I needed to read right now. I'll stop fawning.

And yeah, we were talking of getting coffee! Haven't set a date yet, but hopefully soon!

Re: Underground

[veritas6_5]

Thank you so very much for the fawning. I've really enjoyed it!

My cat also expressed his surprise to find that I finished something in a short time, but it was just one of those things that had to get out there. Thanks for your comments!

[51stcenturyfox]

Oh, this is great! I agree with firesnap; it's rare to see stories where Gwen is vulnerable instead of worried about somebody else.

Nicely realistic scene-setting too, down to the rank taste of the water and the cold. Poor things. <3

[veritas6_5]

Thank you. I appreciate your opinion!

[evalentine99]

Very good. LIked that Gwen was not the harpy and was hte one hurt.
Great stuff

[veritas6_5]

Thank you very much!

[aviv_b]

Nicely done - I really like all the details - the iron taste of the water, the scrape of Gwen's body as they life her to the higher part of the cave - it makes the story much more compelling.

[veritas6_5]

Thank you for your comment. And thanks for reading!

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