For arabianred

Aug 17, 2009 02:32

A Rei/Jadeite short set in Magnolias/Laws of Attraction/Etoile Rouge-verse that happens quite a few years in the future. This is to inspire ficathon and combat RL insanity and stuff!!

Title: Coucher Avec Moi
Characters/Ships: Rei/Jadeite and a few OCs
Genre: Humour/Romance/Family
Rating: PG13

We won't mind sleeping on the couch, honest... )

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arabianred August 18 2009, 14:05:37 UTC
*SQUEEEEEE*

THANK YOU for writing such an awesome little piece!! Man, Raye was just popping them out, wasn't she? And I love how Raye always has something up her sleeve and is never one to be outdone, especially by her own kids! Hehe, she squashed that argument in the best way possible. I can just see them scrambling away from the couch. And you got the whole thing down--it is so true ... they're never done!

Raye murmured, jet-black hair falling around her shoulders like a rain of midnight silk as she tipped her face up for his kiss. <--You have such a way with words! This made for quite the image.

I'm so glad they married and I got this preview into the future! You know what that means now, right?? I'm gonna have to bug you for everything IN BETWEEN!!

Again, THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing this!! It definitely gets me into the writing mood. :)

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verisimilitude9 August 18 2009, 18:39:07 UTC
You're very welcome :D

Yeah, VO1 and I were talking about the sprogs of the various couples and decided that it might be funny for Raye to have like... all boys with a much-younger, much-harassed girl. Poor Tory's gonna go through hell when she starts dating, as all her brothers will so be tailing her and her date in different cars and shit, and all jump out of seemingly nowhere at the first sign of inappropriate touching :P

And yes, Raye's never to be outdone by her own kids! Her competitive spirit would never allow for that. Buuuuuuuuut they'll give her a run for her money, that's for sure. She probably goes to bed some nights whining to J. re: "Why the hell did I have four kids? They are responsible for every wrinkle and gray hair I have." and he'll be like "I don't see any wrinkles or gray hairs... but you had them because you wanted my body and couldn't keep your hands off of me." And then he'd probably get slapped, but smut would ensue anyway :P

Good luck with all kinds of writing stuff :D

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venusorbit1 August 19 2009, 04:05:35 UTC
First, please let Shawn grow up to be bigger than both of his older brothers. I already have a soft spot for him, probably because he gets lost in the shuffle a lot.

Also: HA! I knew about it beforehand, and it's still GD funny. Raye is super fucking clever, because I think I would have just lost it and screamed 'WOULD YOU GO TO FUCKING BED ALREADY' and thus started a screaming match.

THE COUCH. OMG. THAT COUCH. Freaking...really, I thought it couldn't sink any lower than Zach's Mattress on the Floor, and whenever I think of someone making their primary sleeping assembly a freaking COUCH, I have an attack of like, female Nazi interior designer. A COUCH. My God. It's not as bad as an inflatable air mattress, but still. COUCH.

HAHA..."but smut would ensue anyway". That's how they got into that situation in the first place!

And now I'm going to join AR in bugging you for CouchFic and LOA fic and LBK fic. You will never sleep again!

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verisimilitude9 August 19 2009, 07:11:28 UTC
Hahahahaha. Okay. Shawn can grow up to be bigger than the other two if it pleases you.

Raye probably did the shouting thing before realising that it didn't work as well as you'd think it might, and with teens whom you can't physically push around and cart into bed, guile would win over force. But yeah, she's very clever and devious. We love that about her.

OH COME ON ADMIT IT YOU ♥ THE COUCH XD XD XD For the amusement factor if nothing else :P

LOL. I never sleep anyway, so go ahead and bug at will. Had a busy day today doing RL stuff but now that's all done so I can fic wheee...

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