Comments | veridanya: Breaking Hearts [10/14]

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Breaking Hearts [10/14]

Dec 21, 2011 19:13

Author: Veridanya (軽 and 暗)
Length: Multi-chapter
Genre: Drama, Angst
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sakuraiba, Yama [Friendship], JunBa [Friendship], Sakumiya?
Disclaimer: Only the story is ours
Summary: After a long time relationship they didn't expect that the success of one of them could also meant the end of the relation.

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+ series: breaking hearts, * l: multi-chapter, * c: aiba masaki, * c: ohno satoshi, * c: sakurai sho, * r: pg, * c: ninomiya kazunari, * g: angst, * c: matsumoto jun, * g: drama

Comments 35

wizalian December 22 2011, 01:27:21 UTC

As I think, the first thing that Sho should do first is making Nino out of this story!!! He is the one who made all the thing become worse. Poor Masaki and also poor Sho-chan. Now I'm really feel sorry to him but I still think that Sho still not suffering enough for what he has done to Masaki. However, I feel good that Oh-chan also think that Sho does the wrong things, at first I think he support Sho with Nino. Huh~ this makes me feel better. Goodluck hope you can fix all this problem soon.

Thank you again for this fic!! Can't wait for tomorrow ^V^

veridanya December 23 2011, 00:16:51 UTC

Yeah, at least Oh-chan told Sho how things are. We couldn't let him support something that's so wrong *nods*

Thank you so much for reading <3
Next one will be posted soon as always ^^

d0wn_l0ad December 22 2011, 01:49:05 UTC

kick Nino..
I cant wait to read the next chapt..
thank you very much for the fic.. :D

veridanya December 23 2011, 00:17:23 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

Next chapter will be up soon ^^

so_gracefull December 22 2011, 02:03:44 UTC

Hmmm... I'm still undecided if Sho's suffering enough.. (bwahahaha, am I so mean? XDDD) I guess I want to see more of his sufferings. lol. I know he had mentioned that he needs Aiba in his life again, and that he loves him, but honestly, I haven't seen him prove it. Sorry for being such a cynical person, but how can Masaki be assured that Sho wouldn't cheat on Aiba again if another Ninomiya comes along? I hope Ohno would be able to make Sho realize what an idiot he has really been, and I hope that Nino finally gives up on Sho. As for Masaki... I'm glad that he's getting a little better (or so it seems) but I want him to be more confident of himself.

Only 4 more chapters to go? Why so soon? I'll miss this series.

veridanya December 23 2011, 00:19:37 UTC

hahahaha not so mean, or at least not more than us that are the ones writing him suffering LOL
Yeah, he should prove it. Words are no use without actions

Yeah, just 4 more chapters. Hope it won't disappoint anybody ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting as always <3
Next chapter will be posted soon ^^ (we're still posting daily)

xjlwi December 22 2011, 02:25:27 UTC

first i think you guys missed a "L" here:
"Aiba felt his word collapsed once again when he heard the way the other man addressed Sho"
word?world?
anyway this chapter left me ultimately curious on how will sakuraiba be. Lolx~

veridanya December 23 2011, 00:20:37 UTC

aaaaaah! you're right! LOL Sorry for that!

Well, you'll go discovering it in the upcoming chapters ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting <3

ianne_xxyl December 22 2011, 02:55:07 UTC

I'm yes to make Sho suffer more!!
Just kidding..
They should talk first!

I am excited and looking forward to the next chapters.
I'd like to see how he'll win Masaki again, that if he does. XD
But I hope they do, even if i'm not liking Sho right now.
I think that he no one can make Masaki happy as he could.
Like just no one can hurt Masaki like he did. XD

veridanya December 23 2011, 00:21:32 UTC

Yeah, they should... but are the ready?
Anyway, you'll find it soon what happens ^^

Thank you for reading and commenting <3
Next chapter will be up soon ^^