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[verdictlesslife]

Title: Marked
Author: verdictlesslife
Characters: Ben and Dan
Summary: Inspired by baggyeyes awesome "Artist"
Warnings: Non-graphic smex
A/N: For porn_battle over at IJ.

Comments

[siriala]

It might be non-graphic, but it's hot all the same ! I particularly love how you (and Ben) use Dan's wounds to map his body at first, and the description of Ben's old scars.

I hope you'll be inspired again soon to write them :)

[verdictlesslife]

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! Ben and Dan are always banging around in my head, so I'll definitely be writing about them again soon.

[brushed_velvet]

Whoo!

Incredibly erotic and the first eight words are practically genius. They set the tone which you build on beautifully.

*fans self*

[verdictlesslife]

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

[blaidd_drwg]

Very nice! Love the story being told through a sense of touch with the scars on both men. Sensual & intimate without being graphic.