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[verbalvixen]

Title: Time Rift
Characters: Hiro, Kensei
Spoilers: Up to Powerless
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2336
Summary: Hiro is driven by an unknown force to change history for the better.
Written For: Holiday Heroes' - Groundhog's Day (really stretched this prompt so far, I think I might have broken it)

Comments

[selenak]

Chilling and heartbreaking at the same time. Kudos!

[feyuca]

Wow...this was great. And depressing. It's sad how Hiro tries FIX everything, yet his attempts all end in failure. Even if he's successful in one aspect, he loses another.

Although, I thought the part about mutated dinosaurs was incredibly funny. :D

[shockd]

Sad and creepy. Very nice concept you've got going on here. Much love!! :)

[aunt_zelda]

I'd forgotten that Kiro makes me feel incredibly depressed