Is Minseon really any better than the knights who went there? At least they were honest in what they wanted. Minseok never met the girl before. She fell in love with an image. She became obsessed with what was effectively a corpse. Jungah could be totally evil. About and talking, Minseon could hate her.
I'm just here to throw a wrench in things. I got a really unsettled feeling as I read this.
Minseon also killed someone. And Jungah doesn't care about the blood. That's just unsanitary and kind of telling, because princesses kind of were conditioned against that sort of thing. My call is Jungah is evil and will eat Minseon's heart, then sleep again until someone else falls in love with her to eat their pure love.
well this story is kind of creepy and minseon is obsessive, so. even though i originally started it to be a love story -- which it still kind of is i guess?? -- it's definitely not a cute happy love story. and i'm actually really glad you got unsettled, glad to know i still got it uwu i used to be a huge horror poet so!
i'm thinking that actually jungah doesn't want to leave or take minseon back to where she came from so they actually just stay in the dilapidated castle killing everyone who dares to disturb them and being in a dark obsessive love ♥
OKAY. As long as it was intentional. Sleeping Beauty was bastardised by Disney, after all, so you may have gone that direction but adopted too much of the original vibe. I dunno. It still sounds very unhealthy, but as long as they're happy, I guess? (Maybe their castle takes on a bad rep, and they actually become evil and powerful off the energy of the people. I can easily see them becoming witches out there.)
Okay this is actually really beautiful and also kind of offputting/unsettling in a way?? I think because Sleeping Beauty is my favourite fairytale, but the way you did this had a kind of air to it, like Minseon is kind of a creep but it's okay
this is actually a rlly gr8 comment ahhh i'm so glad you liked it even tho they're your notp n____n and i know it's like creepy but that was good that you felt unsettled bc that was the point !! creepy is my specialty tbh B)
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I'm just here to throw a wrench in things. I got a really unsettled feeling as I read this.
Minseon also killed someone. And Jungah doesn't care about the blood. That's just unsanitary and kind of telling, because princesses kind of were conditioned against that sort of thing. My call is Jungah is evil and will eat Minseon's heart, then sleep again until someone else falls in love with her to eat their pure love.
I ruin everything...
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i'm thinking that actually jungah doesn't want to leave or take minseon back to where she came from so they actually just stay in the dilapidated castle killing everyone who dares to disturb them and being in a dark obsessive love ♥
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and i'm thinking i might?? i'm horrible at writing sequels to things tho so maybe not orz
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I think because Sleeping Beauty is my favourite fairytale, but the way you did this had a kind of air to it, like Minseon is kind of a creep but it's okay
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love you~ ♥
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