Glued Cracks (Jongyu)
Title: Glued Cracks
Length: Oneshot
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jonghyun x Onew
Genre: Angst, Fluff
Words: 1.508
Summary: Jinki was the glue that held Shinee together, but Jonghyun hoped he could be the glue to hold together the cracks of Jinki.
A/N: for crazyoverbishie ♥
( He was waiting. With a few sheets of music in his hands, he was waiting. Not really paying any attention to the notes he wrote yesterday, though. )
Length: Oneshot
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jonghyun x Onew
Genre: Angst, Fluff
Words: 1.508
Summary: Jinki was the glue that held Shinee together, but Jonghyun hoped he could be the glue to hold together the cracks of Jinki.
A/N: for crazyoverbishie ♥
( He was waiting. With a few sheets of music in his hands, he was waiting. Not really paying any attention to the notes he wrote yesterday, though. )
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MMMMMMMMIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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GGYYAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! I LOVE THE SUMMARY...XD
i love the story...i love how Jonghyun tried to do everythinng he can to help Onew w/o forcing it^^
and you're rite...they're CUTE...XXXDDD
okay..since i promised you....i hope you dont mind to listen to my opinion...
you used to much parentheses...more of them are not needed at all...coz i personally think you dont need to used them coz the words inside could blend with the plot naturally...
and some of them...i think you just need to put it in italic...coz theres a line which i think you try to make an emphasizing in some words...^^
but the plot..i cant say too much..but i love it really^^
and it was feel so much different than your previous JongHo..XD...i like your style here...XXDDD
pls do write more..ill be waiting for another awesome pieces from you^^
p.s. im surry if its not the opinion you asked for^^
and im enjoyed it a lot...XXDDD
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Yes, this was the kind of opinion I asked for.
You're right with those parentheses. I tend to do this too much,
as well as too long sentences... hopefully I'll get better ^^
Ah, I love when people say I actually am able to bring
different feels in my stories. I don't like writing all the same XD
Thanks again ♥♥
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That sounds so quaint. Kay, im using that next time when im in the john ♥
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Well, I'm not a native, but I thought it sounded kinda rofl-y. :D
Yes, please use it! Spread it, and sometime, it will be a perfectly normal word XDDDD~
//hides embarrassment
Thanks for reading & commenting ♥
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Pretend i didn't say anything /hides under the table with you cuz imma ninja.
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Just that practicing his lines while having sex...
would be quite fricking funny XDDDD~
I won't pretend. Tshshsh :D:D
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i love it so much
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I feel like the angsty feeling totally got lost ... rofl. I just can't combine Angst & Fluff ... XD
Definitely, he should. It would be interesting to see "A day in the life of Lee Jinki" o.o
Again, thanks for reading & commenting ♥
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It would have maybe represented it better. Yet still ... maybe it wouldn't
change a thing, I need to practice that, I guess. XD
Don't get a sore throat! /makes you a cup of tea with honey
Ugh, they should just do another reality show. That maybe would be able to
capture the leader Onew, instead of variety dorking around Onew XD
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