Comments | verasteine: Fic: It's Over Now

verasteine

Fic: It's Over Now

Jul 05, 2009 17:25

Please read this story on the Archive Of Our Own.

(fic)char:gwen cooper, (fic)type:oneshot, (fic)pairing:jack/ianto, (fic)char:ianto jones, (fic)rating:explicit(sex), (fic)char:owen harper, (fic)fandom:torchwood, (fic)content:relationship/romance, (fic)char:toshiko sato, (fic)category:slash, (fic)char:jack harkness

Comments 112

luvinthe88and20 July 5 2009, 15:50:47 UTC

Oh these two are so fucked up.

Good Job.

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:25:02 UTC

Thank you!

ralnamalfoy July 5 2009, 15:59:25 UTC

This was intense. Interesting take on their relationship ^^

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:25:13 UTC

Thank you!

amand_r July 5 2009, 16:03:47 UTC

I'll be honest, I didn't know where you were going with this, and I think the last third of it is REALLY REALLY strong. That it's Jack who is needy and Into who always tells himself that it's the last time this time, I say (as I repeat the story back to you.XD).

I really like where it ended.

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:25:46 UTC

Thank you very much! I think everyone knows this was me going someplace new, so thank you for your kind words!

amand_r July 5 2009, 20:31:37 UTC

I didn't know that you were trying something different, but I kind of am glad that I didn't. There was a level of surprise that I appreciated.

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:34:15 UTC

Well, let me rephrase, d/s isn't my usual style, explicit sex isn't, and I'm usually all about sub!Ianto. Still, glad to be surprising :).

madder_rose July 5 2009, 16:22:02 UTC

Loved this, very good progression. Ianto angry, with all the power and Jack angry as well, but needy, and they're not even halfway fixed by the end.

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:25:57 UTC

Thank you very much!

shambolicasfuck July 5 2009, 16:35:02 UTC

Oh wow.. that was intense.

Great job.

verasteine July 5 2009, 20:26:06 UTC

Thank you!