Comments | verasteine: Fic (Hawaii Five-0): A Trail Of Sparks (1)

verasteine

Fic (Hawaii Five-0): A Trail Of Sparks (1)

Apr 30, 2012 19:12

Please read this story on the Archive Of Our Own.

(fic)char:mamo kahike, (fic)comm:h50bingo, (fic)pairing:danny/steve, (fic)story:a trail of sparks, (fic)content:angst, (fic)rating:explicit(sex), (fic)char:danny williams, (fic)fandom:hawaii five-0, (fic)type:multi-part, (fic)char:kono kalakaua, (fic)category:slash, (fic)char:chin ho kelly, (fic)char:steve mcgarrett, (fic)rating:mature(themes)

Comments 10

antivol April 30 2012, 21:49:42 UTC

Wow, this is so good! Your writing is awesome, I feel like I see everything. I'm anxious for Steve and his situation, it seems hopeless (but we know Danny's going to be there for him at some point, no?).
Also, you make me love Danny in your fic, and that's not always a given for me. Your dialogues are spot on, I can hear them, you've got Danny's humor and gentleness perfectly! I'll read the other parts tomorrow, I think, it's late here, but I wanted to write before I forget (small head here) and thank you for sharing this.

verasteine April 30 2012, 22:04:59 UTC

You'll have to read to find out what happens next! But thank you very much, this is all lovely to hear, and thank you for taking the time to let me know. Hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!

valis2 May 1 2012, 02:05:52 UTC

This is just exactly what I wanted to read tonight. What a fascinating setup, and I love Steve's inner voice, and the scenario is so absorbing and causes so much tension--I'm on the edge of my seat and I am dying to read more!!

verasteine May 1 2012, 12:22:47 UTC

Yay, that means I did my job right :).

imkalena May 1 2012, 02:12:22 UTC

OMG I LOVE YOU. You are awesome. Um, is it bad to say I wish I'd thought of this? :)

verasteine May 1 2012, 12:23:06 UTC

No, not at all. That just makes me :D.

abbeyrd62561 May 3 2012, 02:46:22 UTC

I am really enjoying this AU story. I love that Steve is a dancer and how he is hurting. And Danny still snarky but truthful with how he feels about Steve. I like how you put in Mamo, Kono and Chin and even Meka. Also the banter back and forth, you really have them down and the plot is so good.

verasteine May 4 2012, 11:17:39 UTC

Thank you very much, glad you're enjoying!

kcs_slayve May 3 2012, 13:35:20 UTC

McDanno/Tumblr led me here.

Glad that it did.

This is a fine piece of work with sympathetic characters.

Looking forward to Part 2.

verasteine May 4 2012, 11:18:06 UTC

Oooh, really? Hadn't heard I had been recced on tumblr!

Thank you!