Comments | verasteine: Fic (Hawaii Five-0): Beneath Our Distant Sky (I Heard Your Voice)

verasteine

Fic (Hawaii Five-0): Beneath Our Distant Sky (I Heard Your Voice)

Jun 08, 2011 15:46

Please read this story on the Archive Of Our Own.

(fic)content:character study, (fic)fandom:hawaii five-0, (fic)char:mary ann mcgarrett, (fic)rating:standard, (fic)char:steve mcgarrett, (fic)type:oneshot, (fic)category:gen

Comments 34

earthquakedream June 8 2011, 14:10:44 UTC

Mary's such a tough chick. You really did her justice here. Great job!

verasteine June 8 2011, 16:42:49 UTC

Thank you very much!

mystizan June 8 2011, 14:27:15 UTC

Wow...wow. This was so hard to read (due to what Mary's dealing with) but at the same time Mary rly is a tough cookie. I was hoping she'd tell Steve but it's entirely possible, depending on when this is in their r'ship, that she would have handled it exactly like this.

jesseofthenorth June 8 2011, 15:39:37 UTC

you were tight. This is fantastic!

mystizan June 8 2011, 16:42:50 UTC

lol glad u think so. :)

verasteine June 8 2011, 16:44:13 UTC

Thank you again!

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mcparrot June 8 2011, 15:05:11 UTC

Good work. I like the way you don't write the obvious easy stuff in your work.
Please write more H5O. I'd read it.

verasteine June 8 2011, 16:44:48 UTC

Aw, thank you. Lovely. I'm hoping to write more in this fandom, but no guarantees. I go where the muses take me :).

deerang2002 June 8 2011, 16:46:57 UTC

This seems very much in character with Mary (handling it all by herself) and for the whole family...tough bunch, the lot of them, huh?

And that was incredibly quick (the fic turnaround, I mean)!!!

verasteine June 8 2011, 18:08:33 UTC

Hermette was able to do a really quick beta on it, so I thought I might as well put it up before I tweaked it to death :).

I'm sort of in love with the fucked up McGarrett family... I'm thinking about doing more in this vein. Thank you!

mystizan June 8 2011, 18:13:53 UTC

WHO is that beautiful creature in ur icon?

idamus June 8 2011, 18:06:54 UTC

That was rough, but great writing (not familiar with the show, will probably never find the time for it either)

verasteine June 8 2011, 18:09:38 UTC

Thank you. Mind you, this fic is based on a throwaway line in one episode, so not really something you'd recognise from watching the show in any case. Glad you liked!

idamus June 8 2011, 19:27:00 UTC

It doesn't really matter if I'll recognize anything or not if I ever do get around to watch, as long as it's not slash, I'll be ever so disappointed if I read that, watches and finds out there's no canon in it, from you I'll read anything fitting that though, as well as canon pairings I know