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topgeargirl2 June 3 2011, 13:51:25 UTC
This was really good

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verasteine June 8 2011, 14:08:05 UTC
Thank you very much!

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ollianrs June 5 2011, 13:55:42 UTC
It's very good. thanks.

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verasteine June 8 2011, 14:08:17 UTC
You're welcome, and thank you.

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sissi_parker June 6 2011, 14:57:19 UTC
Wow. That is great. I had loved to get more about Deniz past in the series. Another confrontation with his mom, his brother. I love the grown up Deniz we get here to see. It´s so sad but so real.

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verasteine June 8 2011, 14:08:58 UTC
Deniz's mother has fascinated me from the first moment I saw her, and it makes so much about Deniz understandable. I'm glad you liked, thank you!

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random_nic September 29 2011, 04:28:28 UTC
So I'm a little late to the party, but I have to say, this is pretty much awesome. You really get us inside Deniz's head, and make us feel the sense of aimlessness in him in this moment. It's like he's searching for something - anything - to find a connection, or at least a direction in his life, but he's failing to find it.

Very well written!

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verasteine September 29 2011, 20:01:22 UTC
Thank you very much!

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