Curveball: Prologue Part 1

[venusorbit1]

At long last, thanks to Thalia, Charlie, Lytton, and Spirit for the read over!

Comments

[adodds122781]

I've read and re-read Econ a million times I was so excited to see that you have this story up!

I've also talked on the phone while on the toilet, so I don't feel totally weird. Zach and myself have something in common! lol

“Oh good, then maybe you should hear this. Are you aware that Kevin is marrying some other woman? This invitation that I just received through the U.S. Postal service says that he’s engaged to a powderhead retiree named ‘Philomena’? Probably from Florida. Probably votes Republican.”

I laughed so hard when I read that Mina is short for Philomena! Wow totally agree this is an old lady name and Zach I love his sense of humor!

[venusorbit1]

SHHHH I ONLY TALK ON THE TOILET TO CERTAIN PEOPLE. Zach gives no fucks. Zach will talk to his best friend, his mom, his accountant, and the girl he's dating while on the toilet.

I just realized everyone in Econ has weird names...Mina (Philomena), Aja, ah oh well.

[warriorofice]

YES!!! CURVEBALL!!!!

I was so excited to see it up and I still haven't read part 2 yet, but I already love everything about it. I've been so looking forward to a Zach and Ami centric fic, and Zach's Naked Night, the call to Mina and Kevin, the sort-of-fling, and what the wacky people are doing around him are so awesome. More, please!

[venusorbit1]

Thank you! I hope to get out the next part sooner than later since I made all of you patient people wait so long.

There will be many more Naked Nights.

[cbrandtwright]

Your dialogue is something of legend. I love how well you develop characters just through how the talk.

Love a million lines, but this one: “It’s still unsavory.” Spot on and made me laugh.

Off to Round 2!!!

[venusorbit1]

UH YOU TOO.

Kevin's full of shit. He's talked to Zach on the toilet too, but he's putting up a front for Mina. In fact, everyone pees in the shower and uses the iPad for the toilet. You can't convince me otherwise.

[elianthos]

OH F*CK I HAVEN'T READ THIS YET BUT I'M FANGASMIN' ALREADY. RAWR.

Actual comment later. I love you.

[ellorgast]

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[venusorbit1]

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