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But You're Pretty When You're Mine, Index Post

Nov 26, 2010 17:18

Title: But You're Pretty When You're Mine
Fandom: Nabari No Ou
Pairing: Raikou/Gau
Length: Approximately 19,000 words, approximately 10,000 of which is porn.
Rating: NC-17. Really really NC-17.
Warnings: *coughs* Graphic. And it's Raikou and Gau, so there are ~kinky themes~ and the romance - if you can call it romance - is seriously ( Read more... )

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ohmeguro November 26 2010, 22:43:33 UTC

>:U THAT IS NOT JUST LIKE TANTALUS.

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<333333 ilu bb. You got my IM spam of this fic.

venusian_eye November 27 2010, 09:17:51 UTC

ILU2 BB :'D

I WILL MAKE ALL THE INAPPROPRIATE CLASSICAL ALLUSIONS I WANT TO! NOTHING CAN STOP MEEEEE (not even good taste ;;)

*does a magical!girl transformation sequence into her gay organized alter ego!* obseletevulture November 29 2010, 20:18:01 UTC

DUDE SOMEONE'S USING MY GAU ICONS! *_*

*brofists*

Sorry, that just made me happy. People are actually stealing them! Yaaays! ^o^

Re: *does a magical!girl transformation sequence into her gay organized alter ego!* ohmeguro December 2 2010, 22:14:50 UTC

gshjzgfkdgts I'm happy you're happy! I love them, so I saved, like, both journal's worth. <3333

Also I really liked your Gau! /stalked a bit.

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epicsoup November 27 2010, 02:26:54 UTC

/bookmarks

:| I'll be back to read this and flail at you about the awesomeness. Please don't run.

venusian_eye November 27 2010, 09:16:41 UTC

>/////< sadlkfjsadlf /MAKES A RUN FOR IT

/trips

And I have an icon to show that Raikou approves of having M moments. obseletevulture November 29 2010, 01:25:39 UTC

*COPY-PASTES TO READ IN PRIVATE THEN COMES BACK LATER TO REVIEW, OKAY?!*

I totally screamed incoherently at someone on chat just now because I realized you updated. XDD

Doesn't that make your classical hades references all kinds of cuddly-happy? (With sprinkles.)

Also: FSSSSSSS obseletevulture November 29 2010, 01:28:16 UTC

Oh, and I think I just saw a J. Alfred Prufrock reference within the first page fo reading. *has your literary children right here and now*

So awesome. *starts wibbling*

Re: Also: FSSSSSSS venusian_eye November 29 2010, 03:47:04 UTC

Aaaaaah, it was a little blatant as far as references go, but hell, I find myself thinking in Prufrockisms all the time. :'D That poem is so memetic; I think "I have measured out my life in coffee spoons" and laugh to myself whenever I use a tea spoon.

POSTS MAY CONTAIN SPOONING? obseletevulture November 29 2010, 20:14:32 UTC

Me, I snicker every time there are peaches in the house, and tend to run up to my siblings shouting, "DO I DARE TO EAT A PEACH?!"
And they're usually kind of weirdfaced, then they snicker, "You're so weird..."

Aaand...I'm going to sort of review/ramble here if that's okay. ^^;;

I vaguely recognize the "I am a tyrant after all" but it's annoying because I don't know why I recognize it.

J. Alfred Prufrock is oddly appropriate on another note for approaching poor Gau's neuroticness. If I were that pesky neighbor at the end, I'd probably say something dumb like, "The mermaids were really singing last night over at your place last night, hm? Might want to practice with that spear-fishing..." And then they'd both just look at me funny. (Everyone kind of does when you have the horrible tendency to turn innocent lines of poetry into horrible euphemisms. Or at the least, quote "Helen of Troy does Countertop Dancing" at the best of times, and the worst of times.)Mm, but yes. Read it once, with profound neurosis, then read it again to make ( ... )

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