All That's Left

[venus_fiction]

Title: All That’s Left
Author: Jules venus_fiction.
Fandom: Twilight series by Stephenie Meyer.
Prompt: 065. Scream of my own personal Twilight challenge.
Rating: PG13.
Characters/Pairings: Bella/Edward, Esme, Carlisle.
Word Count: 4,827
Disclaimer: Twilight and all things affiliated belong to Stephenie Meyer, I am making no profit off of this, it is purely for

Comments

[v_thundermuffin]

Excellent beginning - I think that this does a great job of showing Bella's true character, and the inner turmoil that she would undoubtedly face regarding her transformation. I really enjoyed reading it and am glad that you took the time to post it! :)

[venus_fiction]

Thank you!

I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. I'll be posting the next chapter soon, so keep on the lookout for that! :)

[venus_fiction]

Thanks for letting me know you like it!

I'm glad you do. I'll be posting the next chapter soon!

[kappamaki]

For every one of my screams, he was screaming too.

That gave me goosebumps!

I loved this and can't wait to read more. ^_^

[venus_fiction]

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it. It's really encouraging to see that my writing is powerful enough to bring out a reaction like goosebumps in someone. :)

I'll post the next chapter soon!

Also? Icon love! <3

[vanilladirt]

I really loved this. I'm excited for the next chapter. :)

[venus_fiction]

Thank you!

I'm so glad you like it! More to come soon, I promise. :)

[liezel77]

Loved it! Can't wait for more.

[venus_fiction]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :)