im trying to breathe im trying to breathe wait gimme a moment I AM TRYING TO BREATHE
LAYHAN
LAY MOTHERFUCKING HAN HOLY SHIT MY OTP I HAVE NOT READ SOMETHING LAYHAN THIS GOOD FOR LIKE...A DECADE NOW I WAS WHEEZING THE ENTIRE TIME I CANT EVEN THINK WOW YOU ASSHOLE LUHAN YOU ARE ONE PIECE OF LUCKY SHIT WHEN WILL I HAVE MY OWN REAL LIFE YIXING THIS AU OF A LIFE IS UNFAIR
look forward to a coda with actual porn in the near future.
was wanting to write a proper comment but i saw that one line and I just short circuited that's all i need in life acire, some good old xinglu porn i don even care who you wanna put as top because eff it all sex is good
no but seriously your layhan feels so strong and so close, like they are friends from birth even if they are not, and boy was i DYING when kris got with yixing all my body just went scremaing NO ZHANG YIXING GET YOUR ASS BACK TO LU HAN and oop jongdae being the manga referential extraordinaire i just cannot
yixing is the kaoru to luhan's kenshin im gonna remember this forever and over and jongdae's twelve steps to get kris' ass is definite highlights i love how you made me bias so beautifully sarcastic and nearly overshadowing layhan because you know luhan is lame and cnt even tell yixing he loves him until like days< after yixing and kris broke up why are you so slow and stupid and dumb i mean but hey you are lu dumb what can i say
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KAY NO I CAN'T BREATHE YOU JUST WROTE THIS PERFECTLY MY HEART AHHHHHH!
Idk it's just that I have this fuzzy feeling inside of me and I can't stop smiling because you wrote layhan the way I love layhan and this doesn't make sense bUT LAYHANNNNNNNN. Sorry I am not coherent rn because I've always wanted to read something like this and I finally got to and why are there tears in my eyes TT^TT
Arghhhhh! Okay so the characterization is so perfect and the way you write it so beautiful <3 I just want to keep this with me forever because it's just too good. I'm still probably making a lot of sense because inside my head I'm legit just going fbsjkxzgfcjxMZ
this is just so perfect! your layhan is so well written and you've carved out such perfect personalities for them both, this is by far one of the best layhan fics I've read, it's just so perfectly sweet <3 please please please write more layhan fics!! <3
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LAYHAN
LAY MOTHERFUCKING HAN HOLY SHIT MY OTP I HAVE NOT READ SOMETHING LAYHAN THIS GOOD FOR LIKE...A DECADE NOW I WAS WHEEZING THE ENTIRE TIME I CANT EVEN THINK WOW YOU ASSHOLE LUHAN YOU ARE ONE PIECE OF LUCKY SHIT WHEN WILL I HAVE MY OWN REAL LIFE YIXING THIS AU OF A LIFE IS UNFAIR
IM STILL TRYING TO BREATHE THOUGH
IM SORRY IM JUST SCREAMING
CAN I LOVE YOU
FRICK MOTHER FRICK MOTHER FRICK
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VICTORY FOR JONGDAE!!!
You are very slow Luhan
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was wanting to write a proper comment but i saw that one line and I just short circuited that's all i need in life acire, some good old xinglu porn i don even care who you wanna put as top because eff it all sex is good
no but seriously your layhan feels so strong and so close, like they are friends from birth even if they are not, and boy was i DYING when kris got with yixing all my body just went scremaing NO ZHANG YIXING GET YOUR ASS BACK TO LU HAN and oop jongdae being the manga referential extraordinaire i just cannot
yixing is the kaoru to luhan's kenshin im gonna remember this forever and over and jongdae's twelve steps to get kris' ass is definite highlights i love how you made me bias so beautifully sarcastic and nearly overshadowing layhan because you know luhan is lame and cnt even tell yixing he loves him until like days< after yixing and kris broke up why are you so slow and stupid and dumb i mean but hey you are lu dumb what can i say ( ... )
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KAY NO I CAN'T BREATHE YOU JUST WROTE THIS PERFECTLY MY HEART AHHHHHH!
Idk it's just that I have this fuzzy feeling inside of me and I can't stop smiling because you wrote layhan the way I love layhan and this doesn't make sense bUT LAYHANNNNNNNN. Sorry I am not coherent rn because I've always wanted to read something like this and I finally got to and why are there tears in my eyes TT^TT
Arghhhhh! Okay so the characterization is so perfect and the way you write it so beautiful <3 I just want to keep this with me forever because it's just too good. I'm still probably making a lot of sense because inside my head I'm legit just going fbsjkxzgfcjxMZ
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please please please write more layhan fics!! <3
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