dead; food is the language of love

Mar 10, 2014 22:40

dead krisyeol fic that i started writing back when i first joined the fandom! it's never gonna be finished, unfortunately, but maybe i'll revisit the idea another day.

a thousand touches of the heart
g; 2390 words; kris/chanyeol
canon!fic. chanyeol tries to learn kris' native tongue through food items.

written for sushikabob89 who friggin' gave me the ( Read more... )

deadfic, *krisyeol, exo

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emryses March 11 2014, 03:07:27 UTC
but in Hong Kong, it’s like an additional layer of Wu Yifan has been peeled away. His smiles stretch a little wider, his eyes brighter, and his tongue curls around the vowels and consonants that pitch out clunky and clumsily from Chanyeol’s own mouth like meltwater.

BEST LINE
idk how to write proper comments for fics but daMN acire u make me see the light in krisyeol
also cantonese ignites something in me i get so excited
thank u for posting this it was so great <3 <3

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ventice March 16 2014, 09:42:48 UTC
<33333 everybody should love krisyeol huhuhuhuhuu
CANTONESE MAKES ME SO HAPPY ; n ; i wish i could've portrayed it better hahhahah

thank you for commenting bb

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dailuzo March 13 2014, 10:52:24 UTC
awww even without it being stretched out into a full story it's still all kinds of cute~ and kris needs to speak more cantonese hehe he sounds so hot when he does.

i know nothing about chinese so when i read out the cantonese bits out loud I'm pretty sure I sound like the korean members :p except maybe a million times worse. shameshame

is it bad that this is my first krisyeol? XD

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ventice March 16 2014, 09:44:23 UTC
kris speaking cantonese speaks to my soul ;;;;
heheheh i made my friends say out the words when i was writing out those parts just so i could get a sense of how they'd pronounce words; you probably aren't too bad hAHHAH

i'm touched that you chose this deadfic to be your first krisyeol piece then ; u ; thank you for reading!

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hipployta March 16 2014, 20:40:51 UTC
Even without it being complete this story is pretty awesome...sad it's dead for now but good work

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