fic: The Usual, Plus (Brendon/Jon, VERY NC-17)

[velvetjinx]

So here it is: my very first bandom fic. Oh, god, could I be any more nervous?

Title: The Usual, Plus
Author: velvetjinx, or Jo
Fandom: Bandom: Panic At The Disco
Pairing: Brendon/Jon
Warnings: Double penetration, toys, rimming, felching, and fisting.
Summary: The boys are in the cabin. It's a frustrating time. Brendon and Jon work out their frustration in

Comments

[the_popup_book]

wow...that was really intense and definately NC-17!

[velvetjinx]

Thank you! And yeah. *laughs* It really really was. Not the most NC-17 thing I've ever written, but it's sure up there.

Also, your icon is awesomeness. For serious.

[ikle_pattikins]

that was hot
i just sat there for like 10 minutes speechless
this was so great

[velvetjinx]

Thank you so much!!! I'm pleased that you enjoyed it! :)

Also, BONES ICON LOVE!!! <3333

[the_randomist]

*melts into a puddle of quivering teenage girl goo*
Thoughts? I have none. You melted my brain away with that amazing wonderful hotness.
ungh...
yummilicious.
Jon...
And Brendon...
And the hotness...
Guh!
*loves*
*mems*
Whee!

[velvetjinx]

Wow, thank you so much!! *beams* I'm pleased you enjoyed it!!

♥

[panic_4_me_baby]

I can't make coherent thoughts yet, but wow. Man, I've read some dirty stories, but never anything that captured Jon in such a wanton manner. I must say though, I like it. More Please.

[velvetjinx]

Is it wrong that I'm kinda happy that you're not coherent? *laughs* But thank you so much!!

*grins* And trust me, I get the feeling that now xingou has me in this fandom writing this pairing she's not going to let me get out of it too easily... XD I already have some bunnies I'm going to start work on after I get some other stuff out of the way.

[velvetjinx]

I actually cried a little bit when I read your comment, I was so touched. Thank you so much. I'm still a little teary-eyed, truth be told. Like I said, this is my first bandom fic, so as always all feedback is appreciated, but comments like yours are like...like butter icing on a very chocolatey cake.

Also, I've been totally corrupted into loving Brendon/Jon myself (even though I shipped Brendon/Ryan for a whole three days before I started writing this fic) so anyone I can bring with me is a bonus. XDDD

Thank you again for leaving such a wonderful comment!!

[velvetjinx]

Thank you again!!!! I have to say that I quite enjoyed writing kinky!Brendon (and by quite, I mean a LOT) and for some reason top!Brendon seemed like the most obvious choice. Maybe it's how they are in my head?

The flip flops thing is not something I can take credit for, I'm afraid. That was xingou who got me to put that in there, and I'm glad she did, because it's just so JON. And I'm very very glad you picked up on the total love that they have!! I was worried it would get lost in all the porn... XD

\o/ I will be writing a Spencer/Ryan companion to this in the hopefully not-too-distant future, to cover the rest of the prompt I was given. And I don't think I'll ever stop writing Brendon/Jon now I've started. It's like a drug.

(Isn't it gorgeous? I'm quite liking yours as well, though, I have to admit... *stares*)