My losing Iron Kink Entry!

[velvet_mace]

TITLE: Freedom
PAIRING: Manga!Bradley/Roy.
RATING: NC-17
WARNING: Bondage, slavery, misuse of office equipment, humiliation. Spoilers to the end of the Manga.

I kinda rushed the ending on this, cuz I wanna take a walk.

Comments

[forgottenlover]

::squee:: I can just eat up Roy's mental anguish at the end there ::cheers::

[velvet_mace]

Yeah, I love to torture Roy. I don't know why. I'm kinda obsessed with him.

[forgottenlover]

Everyone has to have something to obsess over ::grins::

[devils_devotion]

4800 words in 90 minutes. You are my hero.

In regards to the story: AWESOME. Wrath really is just a sucker for good fun. XD You're right, the ending DOES seem a bit rushed, but it's no big deal. IT CERTAINLY DOESN'T MAKE IT ANY LESS HOT.

Riza's lack of mind-numbing surprise at the end was ♥s. She was just like, "Yeah, well, you've been debauched. Let's get out of here."

Heh.

[velvet_mace]

Well, it was more like 2500 words in 60 minutes and the rest in another 2 hours.

[prozac_pixie]

Non-con and humiliation, my two biggest kinks, so it's safe to say this made me just *insert pencil keyboard mashing*

I can't decide if I'm happy about Riza's rescue. Part of me's all fuzzed for happy ending, the other part's screaming that it wants to see how it plays out when Wrath gets back.

But yay for rescuing and YAY for the awesome hotness of your porn.

Any chance of a link to the winning fic (if this lost I would love to see what topped it)?

[velvet_mace]

Sure Pride Goeth by mikkeneko.

[goodbyemagpie]

I know I'm really late here but...This was so hot. Bondage and non-con, plus lots of yummy Roy humiliation. He is MADE to be humiliated.

I'm also glad I'm not the only one who saw inklings of this (just what did happen that night Wrath kept Roy in his office?).
The mentions of others added a very nice touch, and as much as I didn't want him to be rescued (because I am a horrible bitch 8D), yay Riza 8D.