Comments | velvet_mace: Hohenheim x Ed x Al

velvet_mace

Hohenheim x Ed x Al

Aug 20, 2005 17:39

tir_synni I'm so sorry it took me an extra day to do this. My bad. But it's done. This story beat me up, insisting that it have something of a PLOT as well as sex. Oh well. This is by the way set in the MANGAVERSE rather than Anime FMA ( Read more... )

fma: hohenheim/ed, angst, fma: hohenheim/ed/al, smut

Comments 43

mikkeneko August 21 2005, 03:08:52 UTC

*goes to turn on air conditioning*

velvet_mace August 21 2005, 05:38:47 UTC

Oh, can you give me some too, my house if freaking hot... oh wait, you meant this fic was making you warm. Yeah... I'm kinda proud of this bastard child.

pocket_girl August 21 2005, 03:49:44 UTC

uh *__*
i skipped most fics lately, because i have no time to read them (sorry, everyone ;__;), but this particular pairing is something I couldn't miss!

and it's so porn!! *___*
you're the best *___*
bad dad, and worse kids... i want to read it over and over *__*

and, i wonder, if brothers really did it, when were left alone? *__*
i want to read about it too *__*

velvet_mace August 21 2005, 05:39:44 UTC

Ed and Al sleep naked together in the same bed, and have no trouble getting involved with a threesome with their dad... I'd say they've probably been less than chaste with each other.

sarah_the_crab August 21 2005, 04:16:09 UTC

Whee! *dances around*

Wonderful porn!

velvet_mace August 21 2005, 05:40:02 UTC

Thank you. Ha, I made you dance!

reformedvandal August 21 2005, 05:24:17 UTC

Beautiful

velvet_mace August 21 2005, 05:40:32 UTC

I try.

cephiedvariable August 21 2005, 06:51:58 UTC

My computer doesn't seem to want me to write a review to this fic for some strange reason. I've had my internet shut down four times and I'm getting sick of writing about how good a writer you are. >__>

So I'll just say this: I'm not the biggest fan of porn, yet you are one of the few people I will always read porn from despite the fact that your porn tends to, uh, be this- squicky in an extra special way. Why is this? It's because you kick ass. The, uh, end. o__O

And, huh, you call that a pretentious title? You should read Samuel R. Delany. Talk about pretentious titles- he calls his stories things like: Stars in my Pocket Like Grains of Sand, Time, Considered as the Helix of a Semi-Precious Stone or We, In Some Strange Power's Employ, Move on a Rigorious Line. Brilliant writer; most pretentious titles EVER.

velvet_mace August 21 2005, 06:59:27 UTC

Wow, if I can get you to read my squick!porn despite the fact you don't like porn or squick, that's a high compliment indeed.

Those are great titles... very pretentious.

Most of my titles tend to be one word, like er Crush, or Marigold, or Pawns. "Echoes of the Dead" is both long and rather evocative for me.