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velvet_mace

Collared Chapter 7

Jan 20, 2012 16:48

Title: Collared
Pairing: Eventual Sherlock/John plus Mycroft
Rating: Eventual NC-17 (You'll have to be patient), this chapter R.
Genre: Slave!fic AU, drama, angst
Warnings (for entire fic, not just this chapter): non-con, slavery, violence, emotional and physical abuse.
Word count: 6600
Summary: Written for This Prompt: In a world where the ( Read more... )

sherlock/john, rated: nc-17, collared, fic: bbc sherlock

Comments 97

runes01 January 21 2012, 01:06:37 UTC

This is amazing. Like really really really good.

So much manipulation and everything! And Mycroft! His character is just so guh! So controlling and domineering <3

John just has so much to think about, and those last lines of Sherlock! Shattering instead of breaking, so much more vivid and detailed!
Love it so much <3

velvet_mace January 21 2012, 02:25:25 UTC

I admit to having a fetish for dom!Mycroft.

Things look pretty dire for John, yeah.

golden_bastet January 21 2012, 02:08:00 UTC

:'(

Well, at least Sarah was forced. Because it would be awful if she'd done that willingly.

velvet_mace January 21 2012, 02:27:54 UTC

Sarah is really the victim in this. She had no idea what she was getting into and she got herself pretty thoroughly yanked around by everyone. She has good reason to feel pretty angry about the way things turned out.

This was John's big dick move.

foxgloveli January 21 2012, 02:17:03 UTC

My heart, it aches

:-(

*waits eagerly for more*

velvet_mace January 21 2012, 02:28:40 UTC

Yeah. This fic is kinda mean.

winhall January 21 2012, 02:36:41 UTC

Oh the DRAMA of it, the DRAMA! ;____;x
It's all so... I have NO words!
There's John, and he does like Sherlock, he'd just rather like him FREELY, not forced into it by slavery. But Sherlock is so horribly insecure, and knows how difficult he is to be around, he's certain that John would just walk out on him if he had the chance. So of course he likes owning him (he'd like that, regardless). He NEEDS to own him, to know that John will always be there.

I love this so much, seriously, it's an amazing story.
Incidentally, I found this update early because someone had linked it on tumblr and I was randomly browsing the sherlock tag. <3 This fandom is a thing of beauty. Mad, certain, batshit crazy most of the time, but beautiful nonetheless.

velvet_mace January 21 2012, 03:24:17 UTC

Yeah, John and Sherlock would have been great friends if there weren't the whole slavery thing between them. Something's gotta give.

mishioo January 21 2012, 02:49:46 UTC

Thank you for updating!! Oh my God, this chapter was amazing and the tension that you create is wonderful. John's emotions are so raw, and Mycroft's ultimatum is terribly frightening. I wonder if Sherlock will figure out the ultimatum? Or if John will refuse to do it. Because I mean I think John would think it easier to be raped by Mycroft, because then it could be fully quantified in his mind as rape, whereas if he seduced Sherlock it would make it seem like he wanted it. If that makes any sense. Either way, really lookin forward to the next chapter!

velvet_mace January 21 2012, 03:54:24 UTC

This is about as angsty as I can write. And thank you!

As for John choosing rape by Mycroft -- that's just not John. Or at least it's not this version of John.

He's not the kind to hate himself because he took an active role to decrease his own suffering. He's going to take charge of the situation to the extent he's capable and turn it to his favor as much as possible. That's how he copes.

He's got his core principles which he won't compromise over, but he is decidedly okay with dirtying his hands -- hence the blowing up buildings, plotting murders, and manipulating unsuspecting girlfriends to perform illegal acts.

So yeah, Mycroft/John's not going to happen, at least not in this fic.