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velvet_mace

Undesirable Chapter 24

Oct 10, 2009 11:35

TITLE: Undesirable (A vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter R)
SUMMARY: The surprising things the Resistance has to offer George and Wally.
Word Count: 6987 -- creeping up again.

( Chapter 24 )

original, undesirable

Comments 17

regnet October 11 2009, 07:19:59 UTC

Brilliant, this underground thing is like a slave trade. Profiting from people in crisis. Maybe Chuck is a vamp in disguise - the whole hypno thing seemed pretty hokey. ;-)

I'm really going to miss George. Been rooting for Jeffrey and him. Poor guy stolen right under his nose again. Perhaps he will be lucky the next time. It's amazing how Jeffrey is doing so well tracking Geo down - it's like he has got some GPS on Geo. I hope you write more. You have such a vivid imagination - I love the whole notion of bloodtrust cards; it's hilarious! If vampires did indeed run the world, that would indeed be the way to go. ;-)

Okay, do these sex clubs really exist? Wow. Wonder what research for those were like.

velvet_mace October 11 2009, 07:28:02 UTC

Sex clubs only exist in my mind, LOL, so the only research I did was to spend a few hours imagining how to make such a thing legitimate sounding.

Actually, they are kind of anti-profiting. Chuck seems to spend money left and right.

Jeffrey's not out of the picture, but you may have to be a bit patient.

eve_n_furter October 18 2009, 22:09:38 UTC

Mixed emotions here: Give me more/I don't want this to end. I'm sure the reunion with Jeffrey will be something else, but don't tell me, please :D

velvet_mace October 18 2009, 23:59:04 UTC

I can see the end of the tunnel as far as this story is concerned. It's not that many chapters away. But how it's going to end, nope, not telling.

drelfina October 22 2009, 21:46:54 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAHA

I knew it.

Well, not in the WORST way, but I knew that the resistance would let him down eventually.

Because hell, in a world like this, even the resistance has to be pragmatic. The world works. It just doesn't work to George's advantage.

Pooooor guy.

*cackles*

But god someone needs to smack his head in to get him to understand it. Though I see how he'd feel - Chuck has to take care of all his people, while George's life is the one tossed to the wolves. Vampires. Wahtever.

eternityras May 28 2010, 19:57:12 UTC

"Oy. Now I can see why you were an only child." touche XD
"You know what happens when you have no leaders? I'll tell you. Nothing." sounds like what mao was doing to china.

is jeffery that bad? ... to me, he's certainly looking the lesser of evils.

velvet_mace May 31 2010, 23:29:58 UTC

Well, George was a difficult toddler.

Jeffrey is Jeffrey. I think any vampire would be "bad" to George at this point.