Undesirable: Chapter 23

[velvet_mace]

TITLE: Undesirable (A vampire novel)
RATING: NC-17 (This chapter PG-13)
SUMMARY: Help finally arrives.
Word Count: 6673

Comments

[rosetower]

I absolutely love this story. Honestly, I've spent all day reading this. ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next!

[militsa]

[velvet_mace]

Are they trustworthy? I think a lot matters on what you are trusting them to do.

I'm actually getting towards the climax.

[virginymph]

kick. ass.

:D more updates! Please, this is the only vampire story I like.

[velvet_mace]

Is updated! (sorry for the late reply).

[eternityras]

duuuuuuuuuuuude, that was the Vestalar 0.0

duuuuuuuuuuuude, i'm sort of in awe of him (forgetting for a moment that you are the writer and this is your story, thus indirectly in awe of you too)

[velvet_mace]

Yes. He's a bit larger than life isn't he.