Comments | velvet_mace: Pets Chapter 4

velvet_mace

Pets Chapter 4

Jul 17, 2005 22:11

OOOOH BOY this one's a SQUICKER...

PSA WARNING: Now I know in my fics I describe a lot of acts that no one in their right mind would do --- raping, torture, transmuting body parts and the like -- and I've never felt it actually necessary to WARN my readers that doing such things will get you in trouble. But for some reason, I feel it necessary ( Read more... )

fma, rated: nc-17, fma: greed, fic, pets, fma: sloth, fma: al

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sky_dark July 18 2005, 05:38:39 UTC

Greed is oily. I love him. So delicious in his manipulation. He makes my toes curl >D

velvet_mace July 18 2005, 16:21:19 UTC

Aw what do you mean. Greed loves the little bastard. Loves every hair on him. He did this out of LOVE I say. LOVE.

popsiclekitten July 18 2005, 05:43:24 UTC

I felt so bad for Al this entire thing . . . I sniffled. Admitedly I'm in a weepy mood after finishing the HP book, but still. Damn. Now to wait for the breakout.

velvet_mace July 18 2005, 06:06:09 UTC

Heh! Yeah, Poor Al. But it is PUNISHMENT. It wouldn't be punishment if it were something he was enthusiastic about.

Of course most people just, you know, beat their characters to punish them, rather than do elaborate rape/psychological numbers on them.

thisisnotmyname July 18 2005, 05:51:49 UTC

holy hell. SO EVIL.

wow, this is almost envy-grade evilness on sloth's part.

but you did manage to squick me with the tenticles, so woo! lol your work here is done!

velvet_mace July 18 2005, 16:22:23 UTC

How can you go wrong with tenticle rape?

Sloths an evil bitch.

mikkeneko July 18 2005, 06:48:07 UTC

No offense meant at all, but I'm amused that erotic asphyxiation goes higher on your squick meter than transmutation of body parts. :)

velvet_mace July 18 2005, 16:24:02 UTC

LOL. Like I said in chat, people actually can and DO kill themselves with erotic asphyxiation. No one has died yet transmuting a wang on themselves.

Though both situations are squicky.

Plus this chapter had quite a few other squicks as well, including rape, bondage, forced voyuerism, and het sex.

forgottenlover July 18 2005, 09:15:09 UTC

::hugs it:: SQUEE

velvet_mace July 18 2005, 16:24:43 UTC

Thanks!

Squeeable is this? Better than OMG YUCK!

forgottenlover July 19 2005, 01:58:16 UTC

why would it be OMG yuck? I wrote Gluttony/Ed, which was considerably less neat and shiny than this, as that had a small nose wrinkle quality since Gluttony isn't really *pretty*

velvet_mace July 19 2005, 03:26:57 UTC

Ah so YOU were the one who wrote that. That was awesome. And squicky. And good.

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