Pawns Chapter 27

Jul 01, 2005 09:42

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honooko July 1 2005, 21:39:19 UTC
I have many things to say, but this it the most important: AWWWWW.

Poor Ed and Roy, both thinking the other hates them for something that didn't happen and something that did, but it's okay now so yay. Poor Winry getting all angry worried, and then Al knowing EXACTLY what to say to prove that everything will be fine.

Awwwwww. <3

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velvet_mace July 2 2005, 04:55:33 UTC
It's accidental that he said the right thing. He was being practical. But you know, a few words can say a lot.

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zalia July 1 2005, 22:39:17 UTC
*sniffle*

I'm crying here! Seriously! Tears runnign down my cheeks and everything.

That last scens is just absolutely perfect *bawls*

*goes off to find tissues*

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velvet_mace July 2 2005, 04:56:25 UTC
Wow, moved to tears... That's a compliment!

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zalia July 3 2005, 15:00:26 UTC
^^; Well, put it this way, I just read it again and I still cried. I'm such a sap.

Mind if I friend you btw?

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velvet_mace July 3 2005, 16:44:50 UTC
Not at all.

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crazy_toffee July 2 2005, 01:59:08 UTC
I loved it! T_T But I am too beat up to comment as nicely as I should (finished a massive project today and had to run over to uni to hand it in). So... just general fangirling then, hokai?

Roy's reaction to Ed's confession that he was faking the screams is... beautiful. FInally, there is proof that he is 100% head over heels in lustlove with the boy. Ed's upset attitudes were also very IC. I liked the way he couldn't look at Roy because it made him too uncomfortable and he didn't know how to deal with that... with Roy's and his own actions. The final scene just pulled all of these stray emotions of theirs into a tighter alignment, or so it seems to me. Kudos for that conversation!

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crazy_toffee July 2 2005, 01:59:40 UTC
Incidentally, I'm tired of typing in your LJ url to come here and lurk or post, so I'm going to friend you, okay? XD

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velvet_mace July 2 2005, 04:59:50 UTC
Absolutely. I like friends. Can I friend you too??

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crazy_toffee July 2 2005, 17:35:08 UTC
You already did, but I was going to say yes anyway. XD

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dragonfemme July 2 2005, 02:42:53 UTC
My heart always skips a beat in anticipation when I see a new chapter up! Always worth the wait.

Sorrowful to see both Roy and Ed hurting over the other's pain, both emotionally and physically. Beautiful to see Roy so relieved that Ed "faked it".

Ouch for Roy if they decide to share the comfy bed, but I'm sure with Ed even just being there, some of his own pain will subside...in his heart and his body. ♥♥♥

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velvet_mace July 2 2005, 05:00:51 UTC
I think Roy will suck it up... oooh, double entendre.

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dragonfemme July 2 2005, 05:28:16 UTC
Oooooh, is that a hint? Slurp! ♥

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sky_dark July 2 2005, 06:07:33 UTC
It's nice to see that Roy's got it Bad. And my Winry love grew today =)

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velvet_mace July 2 2005, 06:17:26 UTC
So funny, she and Al are like my token het pairing. She's actually kind of fun to write, so I've been filling her up on the odd jobs to keep her involved.

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